One must write their stories, their way, and only with your characters blessings.  Even if the characters were originally conceived by someone else when they are in your story they no longer allow any other interpretation but yours and you shouldn't either.  The undergraduate essay on comparative philosophy, worth 3/4th of a grade, may be one of the exceptions to that rule but the graduate thesis on the same subject is not.

You can write for your critics or your audience, your characters and yourself, citrus is not an issue. If someone doesn't read a story because it is there and you went to their house at 3am and held a knife to their throat until they read every word and could recite it back to you verbatim, then poll, if you were not in their home with wild red-eyes, smelling of spinach, mangos, cherries, lemon, lime, burnt coffee grounds and brandishing an indiscrete scimitar-keep the polls for glossy zines, and write your story, Your Way.

Nope, just the right mix...lemon, intrige, and danger. 

The plot twist to kill Kagome, never saw it coming. Can't wait to see how Sesshomaru gets his revenge...

Nooo, dont take the lemons out! It is rated MA for some reason. Duh. They can always skip it if they read the beginning of it :p

I want you to know this is the 1st review I have ever written. I have been happily lurking for years, but I couldn't not review after reading your authors note. I love your stories and dont think there is anything wrong with them, or the amt of lemons in them. I don't think you should alter your writing style just because one person doesn't like how you wrote your story. Personally I would tell them to go f@$! themselves, if they dont like how you write then dont read the story. If they dont like the lemons they dont have to read them. If you want to appease them, then you could mark the beginning and end of the lemon to make them easier to skip. But thats my 2 cents worth. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 

If you stop writing lemons, I'll stop reading your stories.  ????????????????????  but honestly though, I don't think you go over board on it, and the fact that your stories also have plots is a big bonus.   Just keep doing you. 

I absolutely adore your stories lemons and all. I'm always waiting on the edge of my seat for the newest update to all of them and when there is one I generally do a mental happy dance. So for me your stories are perfect as is.

I love this story!! This chapter was excellent and if I may add my two cents in, there is never a time where too many lemons is a problem.  As far as I'm concerned you could have them in every chapter.  What's a love story without them!!  And you write them sooooo well!  I say don't  listen to others and write they story that in your heart lemons and all!  If they don't like it then they don't have to click on the button and read!

I love your stories the way that are. Don't let someone try to change you because your stories are you. Plus, you can't have a good romance story without some lemons!

There is absolutely nothing wrong with the amount of lemons you write! I think it works great for you. Also im incredibly upset with this cliff hanger(T_T). the story is so amazing and i can't wait for you to update.!!!

There is absolutely nothing wrong with the amount of lemons you write! I think it works great for you. Also im incredibly upset with this cliff hanger????. the story is so amazing and i can't wait for you to update.????

1-theres is no such thing as too many lemons 

2-ahhhhhhhhhhg i cant wait for the next chapter  :) I NEED MORE!!!!!!

First great chap. Shame on the cliffy lol. Second heck no you don't write too mmanny lemons. If they don't like then they shouldn't reasd them. Nobody is forcing them. They could skip over or stop read the story altogether. Don't listen to the haters and just write YOUR story the way you want.

I enjoy the story just how it is. If someone has a problem they can skip over them without losing too much story line.

there is no such thing as too many lemons.

I like this chapter but this kind of reminds me of OUAT .. I love the fact that you tried to make Kagome turn into a dark miko it would have been cool if she did and then fled to the East. (But that's just me) 

I love the writing I just wish there was more! 

What r u saying? There can NEVER be TOO MUCH LEMON ^O^ (of course if the writing is bad then nothing is good, let alone lemon, but ur writing is awesome). Please write however u want to, fanfiction IS a means to let out people's imagination after all. 

I love the story mixed with a pinch of lime. If someone has problem with lime then they can just skip it. They'll keep reading since they obviously like ur work. You can just to be cautious (if u wanna) write a warning like "Lime ahead","End of Lime" at the lemon part of a chapter~

Ooooooo eagerly waiting for the next chapter~ <3

Great update, I hope anotherbchapter comes out soon.  As to your question/poll, there is more lemon in the story than others, but it is not as distasteful as some which makes it somewhat tolerable.

I so agree with redwolf... ???? if they don't like what you wrot and what you're putting in your story that's their problem????....they knew what they was getting into when they started reading this story.... That person could go to a PG story and move on????...you should keep doing what you do ....I love this story and all the drama, the mystery and romance that is put together.... it's amazing how you doing it????.... keep doing what you're doing and all that and keep bringing in all the amazing story that you writing I can't wait for you to finish chapter 19..????

you have the perfect amount of every thing in your story .don't listen to other pepole if they don't like it  they don't have to read it.

thank you for your time.

Good, keep it coming.