You know, if it takes a lemon to bring her BACK...by all means...write the lemon. It's your story, write however many lemons you want. There are plenty of pg stories that that other reader can read if she/he does not want to read your work. I like adventure stories. But, I do not tell a writer what to write. I simply read a different story if I do not like the plot or what the character's are doing! Good grief...I've being reading stories for years. You either like the story or you do not. You can skip the sex senses and go on. I do most of the time...like I said, I like adventure and sword fighting. Now, if you want to really give us a good sword battle, I would appreciate it...(MWAHAHAHAHA)! A very good story!! :)
Shaina (Chapter 18) - Wed 24 Feb 2016
I love your this story the way it is. You are an amazing writer and I am totally in love with it. Keep doing what you are doing please. I can't wait for the next chapter.
REDWOLF (Chapter 17) - Tue 23 Feb 2016
Wow....talk about not knowing how to communicate. These two needs a Psychiatrist. LOL...that witch will have a field day with theses two.
Nice and cute chapter. I just knew it had to be Rin. I think Youta has found his mate. Like I said before they make a nice pairing. Great job!
Nice
Aww.. such a cute chapter.. I hope they realise it soon
Great chapters, keep it coming.
Wow good chap. And really a rule? That's just so big brother. To bad spot of fans enjoy it when the writer does that srt of thing at least I know I do do thanks again.
I finally had a chance to read the last 4 chapters and I was blown away at their awesomeness. I loved the lemon scenes and it was about time. Could this young girl possibly be Rin? If it is, I think Rin and Youta would make a cute couple...hehehe. Anyway I just love this story and the way you are protraying Kagome and Sesshoumaru. They make the perfect couple and along with their son, they make the perfect team and family. I hope that Sess would consider making Kagome his mate and Lady of the West. Maybe another child will be in the making. LOL
Great chapters! Update again soon.
Great update and thanks for the shout out.
Nechi (Chapter 15) - Wed 17 Feb 2016
Deadpool was fokin AWESOME. See it when u hav d chance. Oh and great chpt cant wait ti?l she deals with bakayasha and kikihoe
Nechi (Chapter 15) - Wed 17 Feb 2016
Deadpool was fokin AWESOME. See it when u hav d chance
all I can say is love the story keep up the good worK!!!
Great lemon.
Wahoo! Well worth the wait. First I get to watch Deadpool and now I get to read an awesome update! I'm super hyper happy now so update again real soon!
Great, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Loved loved loved this chap thank you
Yea! Ah-Un's here! I love Ah-Un! I want an Ah-Uh plushie!!!! Please tell us how Kagome met this sweet dragon? Was he a baby when she met him? Will there be a lady dragon in Ah-Un's future sometime? Now won't that be a riot! Baby Ah-Uh's flying around everywhere scorching Jaken's backside when Jaken tries to scold them!! Ha ha!!
Good chap I for one asm glad he didn't kiss vomit mouth eww
Mona (Chapter 11) - Mon 08 Feb 2016
I wonder if they will find a way to rid Inuyasha of Kagome's protection. She no longer wishes him to have so maybe she or someone else can remove it or bring it back to her (idk). Anyways looking forward to the next chapter.
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