| please update soon
Aimee- Sat 17 May 2008
| yay, good story, update NOW... or now?
danny- Sat 17 May 2008
| lol i like it but can you make it like a little bit longr please
| not bad, please notify me of any updates. Thank you
Shanalir- Mon 21 Apr 2008
| Very nice chapter. Things are progressing at a nice pace, and Inuyasha's lack of agression was nicely explained. I am surprised that there wasn't more of an effort to preserve the Lady's modesty, although that could be explained as a difference in standards between the Demon and Human cultures, and I suppose the lack of any real protest from Sango and Kagome regarding modesty was abandoned in favor of treating the wounds. All in all, nice chapter, and I look forward to reading more.
elvira- Wed 16 Apr 2008
| Update soon!...
Shanalir- Wed 16 Apr 2008
| Well, I have to say, after a fairly long spell of having only a bare minimum of interest in Kagome/Sesshoumaru fanfiction, stumbling across your story has managed to respark my interest. This is a wonderfully thought out and written chapter, and I can't wait to see where you take the story. My only complaint is that the beginning seems a tad rushed where InuYasha is protesting Sesshoumaru joining the group. A brief comment to the effect of, 'Having decided they had more important matters on their hands than the feud between him and Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha silently decided to let the matter rest for the present." would do well to explain why he's not even making a token grumble about Sesshoumaru ordering him around at the battle site, especially since he was screaming about it at the beginning of the chapter. It's not something that really needs to be changed to improve the story content, just something to consider for the sake of the flow.
qarry- Wed 16 Apr 2008
| please continue this fic. I think it is good so far.
| can't wait for an update ^_^!
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