| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
K,T,M- Sun 06 Apr 2008
| i hope u update soon wit longer chaps and better spellin and spacein
bre- Sun 06 Apr 2008
| have someone proof read ur chaps or u go back over it urself. u have some errors. sounds ok so far well on to the next chap
| | | 