that almost made me tear.

i loved the way you used art to describe sesshoumaru and his 'unrequited' love with kagome.

and the image of when you mentioned chariscuro... omfg so effin beautiful.

Incredibly beautifully written. The vividly poetic language is heart wrenching and gorgeous. Can't wait for more.

Such a beautiful work. His sorrow and his impossibility, I could almost taste it. You show with much accurancy what it is like for a inu taiyoukai to... love (?) something wich he shouldn't : his bastard brohter, and a human priestess.
Please do keep such writing quality in your next fictions, or in this one, should you choose to continue it.

you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful writing. i've become such a fan of yours! i love the story you've thrown them into and eagerly await the next parts!

-hasu86

awwww, that was soo sweet, is it just going to continue it if enough reviews come>