| HANYOU, HIGURASHI, and work on your grammar!! Those are the most glaring mistakes I can remember. If you cant remember to fix your own mistakes, get a beta, because its hard to read through all the mistakes and still enjoy the story. Also, you're not putting much feeling into the characters, and everyone is OOC. Also, not enough background info on your story.
blackheartangel- Sun 27 Jan 2008
i love this story please update soon.
and please make the chapters longer that would be really nice.^_^
danny- Sun 27 Jan 2008
| I really like the story I hope you finish and make it longer
Chelsea- Sun 02 Dec 2007
| that was an awesome story it left me on the edge good work
daniela gonzalez- Sun 25 Nov 2007
| oh hurrry plz must know what will happen to kinkyho inuyasha sango miroku shippo kirrara and sessy kags
Koroleva- Sat 24 Nov 2007
| i love this fic!!!!! update soon plz!
faby- Fri 23 Nov 2007
| wowwwww!!!
kotainuchan- Tue 13 Nov 2007
| I like it so far. Update soon please.
Faby- Mon 12 Nov 2007
Hanyon, and mannnnnnn but it was a great!!!
Black child- Mon 12 Nov 2007
I TOTALLY LOVE IT please update soon .^_^
chelsea- Sat 10 Nov 2007
| i like it please update soon!
Maru's Mate- Fri 09 Nov 2007
plz continue. I love this fanfic so muchI cry because it's only one chapter. INUYASHA'S A JERK AND A DICKWAD
KAGOME ROCKS AND SHOULD BE WITH SOMEBODY WHO WILL TREAT HER RIGHT.
her song should be Ring the Alarm by beyonce and irreplacable by beyonce.
?- Fri 09 Nov 2007
| Write.
Faby- Fri 09 Nov 2007
Write more, please!
Bye,
Faby
Demonic Kunoichikagi- Fri 09 Nov 2007
| This is great. Update soon.
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