|you know you don't have to break up the conversation, when it's one person speaking only use two " not breaking the sentances up like that, it makes it look like you've got more then one person talking in the same sentance
Liitle Girlie- Mon 15 Oct 2007
|Wow! that's tiring.Going around all day but w/ a cute Sesshy.I don't mind. I suspect that he's not the groom & he's just doing it for Inu.
|Love the beginning!! hope you update soon!!!
Little Girlie- Sun 14 Oct 2007
|Finally, it's getting interesting.I'll wait for any further updates.
Sunset Love- Thu 11 Oct 2007
|I have been wanting to do this story for along time but didnt know away to start or make it really good so i am looking foward to a great strory from you.