luved ur story! ! ! ! ! plz plz plz plz(and i dont usually beg..........ok i but still do but it still means the same)plz plz plz plz plz write more ps:peace+luv+respect=happiness

real nice im lookin foward to other chapters

Kagome And Sesshomaru Are Portrayed Rather Well In This Story! Um Inuyasha Is Being A Tad Bit Off ... Scary! Update Soon!!!

I really like what you did so far. But I will say this a little more detail would be good. Not much but a little. Right now it is like reading the clif notes of the story. I really like the idea. I think you have something great going. Good luck and can't wait for an update.

Interesting beginning... it'll be fun to see what happens when Inuyasha does find out, and watch this plot develop some more. The end of this chapter was a little shaky, but I think you've got something good going here! Hope to see another chapter soon!

~narria