Wow! This seems like an interesting idea. And since you are the author, it makes it really cool. Update soon. ^_^Ja ne!

Dude....KEEP WRITTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is getting really good. You know how to make a good story and where to leave the reader hanging. *claps* i aplaude (cant spell for my life) your work. Keep up the writing and i hope that your Fanfic continues for a while. Best of luck man ^.^

I actually enjoyed this chapter. You should definitely keep writing!

ooh, this is a new one... please write more soon! I'm excited to read it.