| I might have put a little change there and there in the end, but it remains a nice interesting fic. It sounds rich and true.
*sniff sniff*
That was so cute.
I have to admit though, when I started it I was like 'um... what's going on?' so I started from the top and started slow, because the first time I was rushing and then was like "OH OK!" the lightbulb finally came on.
This is great! I love it! I love the way you write! You have become one of my favorite author's.
liz- Sat 28 Jul 2007
| I love it!. its so cool!
The Happy Hentai- Sun 27 May 2007
| I really like this. Like a bar of gold, ths is. Neat and compact but heavy with substance.
Dyquem- Sun 20 May 2007
| I think it is very good. An entire plot, opening, middle and end in about 650 words. We know Kagome is immortal, even though we don't know why it happened. The whys aren't important. It is a complete story in a free form poem setting.
reina- Sun 20 May 2007
| wonderful little drabble. very sweet =)
I liked it..- Sun 20 May 2007
I second Noacat's review. I've been recently reading Anonymous Fangirl's fics, and I could tell the similarity in style between this fic and some of hers. I don't know if you meant to do that, but anyways, I liked it.
I don't know if someone has something against you, but yeah, jerks downrate very good fics on this site all the time. Happened to me. Which is one of the reasons why I lost my drive to update it.
Don't let it get you down like it did to me though. I personally think your fics are awesome.
Noacat- Sun 20 May 2007
| Who the hell rated you down? This story was awesome. I'm totally gonna hafta kick some ass right now, because you deserve a ten out of ten in every category.
Violetcarson- Sun 20 May 2007
| Well, I like it!!!!!!!!!! That was a sweet little one-shot!!!!!!!!! I would like to know the story behind it though, if there is one. Anyway, it was cool, and the ending was sweet.
mortefille- Sat 19 May 2007
| I liked it. It was very simple in writing and had repetition but I think that's why I like it. ^.^
| Aw, I really like that one! It's cute, and sad, and poetic. Very nice job. :)
farfana- Sat 19 May 2007
| I like it, it a little bit confusing but it has meaning and gives you that funny warm feeling when you finish it.
Solaira- Sat 19 May 2007
| Interesting fic, it caught my attention from the start. Very well written.
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