Crimson_Regret- Mon 23 Jun 2008
you are like the best writer ever i swear you write really good you have to write more though

Ice_Angel- Sat 05 Apr 2008
I really love this story! Please update it soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

smachit- Mon 31 Mar 2008
I was searching for a COMPLETED lemon and came across this one. (I get frustrated when I start lemons that are in progress, yes, I have a sad existance,lol) You did not disappoint, o talented hentai authoress! This was quite possibly the best Sess/Kag lemon with a plot I have ever read. You have wonderful command of language and the flow was smooth and easy to read. I appreciate your talent and look forward to more Sess/Kag stories from you in the future

smachit- Mon 31 Mar 2008
I was searching for a COMPLETED lemon and came across this one. (I get frustrated when I start lemons that are in progress, yes, I have a sad existance,lol) You did not disappoint, o talented hentai authoress! This was quite possibly the best Sess/Kag lemon with a plot I have ever read. You have wonderful command of language and the flow was smooth and easy to read. I appreciate your talent and look forward to more Sess/Kag stories from you in the future

Demonlordlover- Sat 02 Feb 2008
This story has been nominated to the Dokuga Awards 1st Quarter! The Dokuga Awards is a yahoo group that honors Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanworks (fanfiction and fanart.) Voting is currently underway and will end on Feb. 10.

helleboros- Mon 28 Jan 2008
What I read was nicely written and well executed. I stopped when Kagome started "plotting". I just don't like Sesshomaru as a switch; it messes with my ability to suspend disbelief. Nevertheless, like I said, what I read was nicely written.

orchid- Tue 08 Jan 2008
please please please update soon

tilayha- Wed 02 Jan 2008
do we want a last...last chapter!!!! such a silly question. OF COURSE WE DO!!!!!! I can't believe this fic is finished. you wrapped it up very nicely and left the naraku problem there so it can be picked up easily for the next story. I have enjoyed this one very much! tilayha

Crystal Dragon- Fri 28 Dec 2007
This was probably one of THE BEST Lemon's I have ever read!
I really do look forward to you writing more like this and if you did write one about Kagome's first heat with Sesshoumaru presant than I would readily read it. There are many who write fics like this but you took it to the next level and made me want to jump my husbands bones when he got in from work. That is the response to a really well written Lemon!

Avid reader


squirrell a.k.a megan- Wed 19 Dec 2007
please make a new chapter, pleeeaaaseee. the story is really good and you just left it with a cliff hanger. your killing me with the anticipation.

Shawna- Thu 08 Nov 2007
hey cool story by the way it was funny and romantic in a weird way. any ways can't wait until the next chapters.

Megan Consoer- Thu 08 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Sailor-Saturn-415- Tue 06 Nov 2007
I just absolutely LOVE this story!!! You are an amazing writer and I can't seem to get enough of your stories. I am sad to see that this story is over and would love to see another chapter. I would also like to see 'Family Secrets' finished.
Thank you for such great stories!!!


Red-Smartiez- Mon 05 Nov 2007
Although I was expecting a BIG lemon, I liked it anyways!! =)

It is like heat...all over again XDD!!!!

LOVED IT!!! You did an amazing job!!!

Don't be surprised if you get nomiated at SS Annual Awards next year ;)

tabby l sandberg- Sat 03 Nov 2007
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! NEXT!! NEXT!!! *smiles*

Hime-Jun-Hi- Sat 03 Nov 2007
IF YOU WAIT AS LONG AS LAST TIME YOU SHALL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Inkasha Tashio- Sat 03 Nov 2007
Awesome, can't wait to see what happens in the next tale!!

Winggoddess- Fri 02 Nov 2007
That was a great ending! A little sad though. I'll be looking forward to their new journey together...hopefully sooner than later.

ElegantPaws- Fri 02 Nov 2007
Cutting to the Proverbial Chase:


Have I left you wanting more?

… Duh….

Well, I have decided to continue our favorite couple's adventure, in a new story.

Woohoo *Happy Dances Across Screen*

However, it will be a while before the next will appear. And as a warning to all you hentais, the next part will be less lemon and more story.

*I like story with my sensuality so you go on with your extremely talented self (wink).

It will not be about Kagome's heat, but will instead pick up some time down the road from this adventure. It will also contain the evil villain, Naraku!

*Excellent sounds delightful and intriguing.

If you are very loving (and I know you are), and leave me reviews to the effect, I will consider an encore lemon…

*Big Big Puppy Eyes Batting with a Big Dreamy Smile Up At Authoress*

This chapter rocked, loved the fight sequence, and the delicious prolonged lip lock and its effect on everyone in its wake XD. The internal dialogues were excellent too as always. Just loved it ! Very much looking forward to your next story when time permits you to take us into the new adventure.

Oh…(soft smile)…and right back at ya (wink) congrats on the Nomination Woman! So deserved it is not funny. You straddle that beautiful line of sexy, but not raw, sensual but not porn…just right, not gratuitous in anyway, a pleasure to read always and a great sense of humour, a nice package in short…hehehehe…I said package.

EP…who wuvs you too….REALLY.

Miko53- Fri 02 Nov 2007
Great Story. Funny too. I liked it very much.


Any9- Fri 02 Nov 2007
MMMMMMmmmmmm! Yamyyyy, realy realy delicious end.
I can't wait to see your next story.
Please notify me when you post the first chapter.
You my friend had gained an eternal fan in me, so please don't forget me.
With all the consideration in the world, your fan Any9.

Nikki- Fri 02 Nov 2007
OMFG you so have to do another story after this. This chapter just left me drooling for more. please please please.:D

K.M.- Fri 02 Nov 2007
Yea!! I was getting worried that you would never finish, but you did and I liked!! It did end a little werid though....maybe you should add another chapter *hint hint,nudge nudge*

serasvictoria666- Fri 02 Nov 2007
What a great story! I loved everything about it. You are an amazing writer!
And I can't wait to read the next fic.

Sweet_Dark_Silence- Thu 01 Nov 2007
*melts into puddle of hormones*
Nice finale! Shame all good things must end, though.
I look forward to your next fic!

tabby- Wed 24 Oct 2007
more more!! next next!!!!

ktshabatie- Thu 11 Oct 2007
I absolutely adore your story! I was reading it since it was nominated for Best Lemon and I must say, you have a great way of writing! Please add me to your update lists for this (and any other Inuyasha fanfiction you have), since I'd love to keep on reading your work!

3 kt

Megan Consoer- Fri 07 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Koroleva- Tue 04 Sep 2007
i love iit i love!!! it was so hot i so need a cold shower now or just takle my mate when he gets home ;) that was so sweet how he told her about everything though or how they told each other they loved each other!! 3 i loves it so much.. i love this story period :)

ElegantPaws- Sun 02 Sep 2007
I truly enjoyed the emotional depth you gave to their current romp, it was heart felt, and wonderfully sensual and romantic. There is nothing else to say. So very worth the wait dear girl. Brava! As always...wink.

Arrianna Bodoh- Fri 31 Aug 2007
I've been reading Fanfics since I was ten and let me tell you...I've never red anything fantastic and so well written. I just love how he is...and Kagome bringing vibrator to the demon that's just plain good fanfic. Hey...I have a couple good ideas for a fanfic, it you wanna steal them from me, just email me and I'll send them to you. I sometimes write Yaoi,,,oh occasions I write Yuri...but Hentai is so much fun.
You are a great author...keep up the good work Tiegrsi. (Oh call me Luna.)

Tana-san- Thu 30 Aug 2007
ALRIGHT!!!!!!You get all 10's just for the that. That was just so amazingly wonderful. You go, girl!!! Hugs...JEN

Libertine- Thu 30 Aug 2007
Wow, you're about 12 chapters in and they're still screwin' like honeymooners. Always in new ways also. The last lemon was much more emotional then the kinky smuttyness of the other ones, which shows alot of character growth. I look forward to more chapters.

Raya- Wed 29 Aug 2007
I loved it, is there going to be more? Kag can be so dence sometimes

Jean- Wed 29 Aug 2007

Roxanne- Wed 29 Aug 2007
OMG! You are such a FANTASTIC writer!!! Please update=D Sess+Kag 4 ever!

Arryelle- Wed 29 Aug 2007
Hot Damn Your amazing Tiegrsi I thought this fic was over but continuing makes me very happy. That lemon was so just WOW made my libido say Hello! LoL your lemons are very different each time not a easy fit to accomplish but you did it and made it seem like child's play I loved it and the plot you put into it as well I await eagerly for you update oh and please add me to the mailing list thx

Loves Arry

Any9- Wed 29 Aug 2007
I loved the way you described Sesshoumaru's past, and I loved even more the lemon. You have a real talent and I am happy that I discovered this story.

elvira- Wed 29 Aug 2007
wow...very detailed...more chapters please!!

Mei_koi- Tue 28 Aug 2007
OMG wow that was an awsome chapter. I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work and i like how u portrayed sess in this chapter it proves he has a heart w/o being unrelistic. Hope theres more chapters to come, mayb some pups for the two? :D ttyl


Lady Nya- Tue 28 Aug 2007
I loved this chapter. I'm so sad that there's only one chapter left. Well, it's been a good ride.

omizumaru- Tue 28 Aug 2007
Hey there! I know, I'm a bad person because I don't review more often. Unfortunately, there are so few stories out there that actually capture my attention, that I have fallen into the habit of being a lazy bum. But, thank whatever God you wish for people like you and stories like this one that can actually capture my imagination.

That said, let me say something about a review a few below mine.

As a fellow author, of fanfiction and "legitimate" works, I dread the phrase "I don't mean to flame you." I always know exactly where that's headed. The review I'm refering to is, of course, no exception. Hooray for predictability!

So the plotline has been done to death? Wasn't that the initial concept for the story Was I missing something? Was the title not a little self-explanatory? Perhaps I am just overly intuitive. We shall cut people some slack for that.

Moving on. Fanfiction was created by fangirls! ROCK ON FANGIRLS! We're all a little bit fangirlish at heart, or we wouldn't be here! So we use some juvenile Japanese words! What of it? No one that I know of is trying to write the next great masterpiece here on Single Spark. There is no attept to pen the next "Ulysses" or "Grapes of Wrath" or "Metamorphosis!" We do not even own these characters! We only write these things for play and the enjoyment of ourselves and, hopefully, others.

If the grammar bothers you THAT much, go write your own story and stop bothering one of the few authors who doesn't write drivel with your nonsense reality checks!

These stories are fairy tales; in fact, it's right there in the original title. If we want to be perfectly honest about what Sesshomaru would and would not say, then let's just go all out. He wouldn't say a damn thing as pretty little dog demons don't exist.

But that's not much fun, is it?

So, congrats to you on being bilingual and having a plethora of Japanese knowledge at your command. While we appreciate your input, you have totally just been a major buzzkill.

Can we go back to having fun now?

Koiishi_Beloved- Tue 28 Aug 2007
Another awesome chapter. It was really, REALLY good.


*A-Kay*- Tue 28 Aug 2007
It was great and I'm looking forward to your next update. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Fubuki- Tue 28 Aug 2007
Many thanks for the new chapter, I was pleased to discover the update, and promptly read it. I can't wait till Inu has the bombshell dropped on him, It should make an iinteresting chapter, but Jaken will be better.

Hope you had a good break, and am looking forward to the next chapter
Take care

Winters_Snow- Tue 28 Aug 2007
-sighs- It just gets better and better with each chapter. Continue please!

moonrosesa- Tue 28 Aug 2007
I love this fic 10/10 please update soon

Moon Mage Goddess- Tue 28 Aug 2007
*folds myself up in my freezer*

Damn, what I wouldn't give to be Kagome!
That was hot!
I can't wait for more! I love this story so much, I can't wait for more! Kagome and Sesshomaru really are the best couple, and your story does an amazing job of depicting that!

Red-Smartiez- Tue 28 Aug 2007
I LOVED IT!!!! I love how he explained himself, it was SO kawaii!! I can not believe that the next chapter will be the last chapter. Hopefully it will be filled with lemons !! ^^


tealeavesgreen- Tue 28 Aug 2007
I am enjoying this fic, for the most part. The "heat" plotline has been done to death, but whatever.

The only that that's REALLY bothers me is the fangirl Japanese. Not only is it completely extraneous, it's often incorrect. IF Sesshoumaru were to refer to a woman, he would be much more likely to use the word "jousei" or, given that it IS Sesshoumaru and he talks like nobility, hujin or hujou. Onna sounds incredibly childish -- probably because the first writers of fangirl Japanese knew very little.

If it's got an easy, direct translation, ALWAYS use the English. Trust me on this one; I've translated for publication. (Hoshino Tomoyuki's "Suna no Wakusei" (Sand Planet), a novella out of "Fantajisuta.")

Fangirl Japanese just...fails. Often. It's incorrect, out-of-context, the tone is all fucked up, it's jarring, and it's entirely gratuitous. Should I randomly insert German words into fanfic, just because I know a little German?

I don't mean to flame you. WAAAY back in the day, before I knew any actual Japanese, I, too, did the "onna" and "ningen" and "ai shiteru" BS. Granted, I was like 12, but still. I can see how, not knowing anything of the language, you might think it sounds cool or exotic or sophisticated. But it doesn't. At all.

I'm not even going to go into why Kagome is being so complacent about turning into a second-class citizen. I can ignore that. But fangirl Japanese? It burrrnnnsss.

If you want to write in Japanese, I expect to see kanji. And proper conjugation. And, yes, Sesshoumaru should slip into classical every once in a while. If you can't manage that, stick to the language you know: English. It's a perfectly capable language. All languages are linguistically equal. English is feeling sad and neglected. It needs love.

Annox- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Im so impatient. But your overdue!!! ]: Gah, hope everything is alright!

kyttin1985- Tue 21 Aug 2007
holy hell this story is HAWT! I love this story! please update soon!

winggoddess916- Tue 21 Aug 2007
I swear, I love this story more than my own kid! Just kidding. But I did enjoy it very much so. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's so cute to see Sesshomaru begging to be Kagome's mate. Ha ha.

marquishawright- Fri 17 Aug 2007
i so luv this story i really luv all of the lemons in this sory to i hoe u update this story soon it's gettin really good

Li Hua- Fri 17 Aug 2007
enjoy your week with your boyfriend.

Jessica I.B.- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Take your time. There's no rush. I have a enough boyfriends of my girl friends to know that your boyfriend cums first and your story cums second. LOL. Hope you have a blast on your trip and know that you have a new fan. XD

IvyStone- Fri 17 Aug 2007
You made me almost cry... When Sesshomaru asked Kagome to be his... When he asked her if he could keep her and then basically begged her to let him keep her. Who am I kidding? You did make me cry! Please update soon!
Oh, and this is not "Just another Lemon." It's too good only to be that. Your words are poetry even if you are describing a lemon.

Phoenix Wolf- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Hey! Wicked story you have here! I would like to be on your mailing list please. My email is

Thanks tons and I can't wait for the next chapter! ^.^

Fubuki- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Not really happy about missing out on another tasty chapter, but obviously I am just going to have to grin and re-read the whole darn story again, have a good time

Raya- Thu 16 Aug 2007
I love your story so much!
P.s 10 days left

Sailor-Saturn-415- Tue 14 Aug 2007
OMG!!! I just can't wait untill you update!!! I can't seem to get enough of this story. It's got so much more (what's the word I'm looking for... meat, flavor, filling, you pick) content, and not just mindless drabble about some boring side plot that no one cares about. I hate it when there are like three different side plots going on at the same time as the main plot line.
You don't skip over details in your stories but you don't over run them with details either. ((Did you ever read "The Scarlet Letter"? the whole first chapter was about that prison door.))
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

moonrosesa- Mon 13 Aug 2007
please update soon i want to know what inuyasha has to say to her becoming sessy mate and as for suggesions you havent tried against the wall and some more doggy style maybe or her dancing for him to arouse him

oh well

please update soon i look foward to it

ja ne
your fan

Inusbabe- Thu 09 Aug 2007
That was an excellent chapter!

Diva_eyez- Thu 09 Aug 2007
I love it!!! Can't wait for the nexdt chapter!!!

Kai- Wed 08 Aug 2007
Whee! I'm glad to see that you've written another chapter. It has been quite a long time, but it's understandable. e're busy people. Anyways, I'm glad that Sesshoumaru let down his gaurd, and now they're mates! Yay! X3 Did Kagome get her tiny fangs from his own power? I wonder...Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter. Kouga is sure to stir up some unneeded trouble, that's for sure.

WhiteRose-Kurama- Wed 08 Aug 2007
WoW! U R a very talented Lemon writer... I just loved how helpful Kags' friends were and I couldn't believe how much "fun" resulted from Kagome's surprise. U even gave me ideas for things... I'm blown away by the well thought out details you incorporated into this so far. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie :P

jasmine- Wed 08 Aug 2007
i love this fic it's so making love please write more update please

SesshysKagome- Wed 08 Aug 2007
I.m so happy for Kaggy and Sesshy I really enjoy the fact that you made them mates. I can't wait for more.

Red-Smartiez- Tue 07 Aug 2007
LOVED IT!!! L-O-V-E-D ITTTT!!!!!!!! Now, they are mates..WOOTNESS!!


P.S. more more more lemons please =)

WiccanMethuselah- Tue 07 Aug 2007
Oh my. Quite an interesting set of circumstances you've set up here for our fave couple!! I can hardly wait to see where this is going from here- even though it is foreign to my nature to wait PATIENTLY for such things!

Thanks so much for feeding the gaping maw of my imagination. I appreciate, more than I can say, you and all the other authors who work so diligently so that us 'sponge-type' people can soak up all your brilliance!! And I am heartily sorry I haven't reviewed until now - I'm sure all my favorite authors think I've fallen off the face of the earth or something, but it's just that little thing we call LIFE.

Since that's the only thing keeping me from 'death,' though, I guess I'll have to put up with it, and its annoying interruptions in my reading. Thanks VERY much for updating so quickly... and for sharing such a delicious story with all of us!!

Sheena Kinsella- Tue 07 Aug 2007
hi i love your fanfic its both entertaining and most ammusing i hope you update soon please notify me when you next update my email address is
thanks your biggest fan sheena

Libertine- Tue 07 Aug 2007
Hey ElegantPaws, what are you doing in MY freezer? Oh well, shove a couple of those frozen pizzas over and we'll have ourselves a party. Hey Tiegrsi wheres that update, I mean you can't just leave us hanging, Kouga is a very fast runner he should be back with Inuyasha by now!! Lol.

Mei_Koi- Mon 06 Aug 2007
Kool story cant wait till u update, hope its soon!!


chibilee- Mon 06 Aug 2007
thanks for the email alert. just want to let you know i appreciate them. i'm very glad that you updated and i understand the lateness of it. trust me, i haven't much time to read any fic so i wasn't aware of the length of time in between updates. i thought the sweet intimate moments are a nice touch to add w/ the hot sex! especially with how sesshoumaru asked kagome to be his mate. so i take it the expected confrontation and fight will take place soon? hmm...can't say i'm suprised. lol boy won't that be fun! lol looking forward to the next update. take care!

mikiwashere- Mon 06 Aug 2007
Oh...that was good. Keep it up! :)

lex1621- Mon 06 Aug 2007
This story is absolutely incredible! I hope you update soon becasue I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please e-mail me when u update

lex1621- Mon 06 Aug 2007
I have to tell you, you sure do write one hot love seen!

Justtasay- Mon 06 Aug 2007
Okay!!!!! Love the chapter!!!! Though I have ta tell ya, you title is a bit decieving... I don't belive that this is "Just another Lemon"!!! Can't wait for an update!!

Wow I'm a poet... I'm sure you know it!! Wow that was fun to say!

Any9- Mon 06 Aug 2007
Long time no see (and that is all that I will say about your absence), but wooooow what a goodie gooodie chapter. Please update, this story is better and better.

Justtasay- Mon 06 Aug 2007
My only response? Who wouldn't be secretly pleased It IS Sesshy!!!! Estatic to see an update on with the Fest!!!!

krystina- Sun 05 Aug 2007
OMG its sooooo goood please keep writing i fucking love itttttt
so ggood

Jestergirl- Sun 05 Aug 2007
I LOVED IT!!!!! IT WAS WONDERFUL.. when is the next chapter coming???

Koroleva- Sun 05 Aug 2007
i loved it this was freaking awsome!!!! *does happy dance* especially when kagome marked sess that was so oringional i have never read an idea like that her using her miko powers to mark sess!!! keep up the good work and update soon!

whiteinu1- Sun 05 Aug 2007
Keep going ^_^

elvira- Sun 05 Aug 2007
this was awsome!!!...please update soon!!..

Lady Ashira Taishou- Sun 05 Aug 2007
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG that was so sweet I wish everyone could find love that was obviously as deep and meaningful as that.Have you ever thought of writing love stories I think you would be really good at it I know there was alot of smut in that story but if you read it right you can see the undelying feelings of lovefrom the very beginging of the story it was wonderful.It made me realize that all love isn't so easy to find.Thanks for the revalation Seriously.

Nikki- Sun 05 Aug 2007
OMG!!!!!!!!!! just when I thoght you fic could not get any better it has. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait to see where you go with this and IunYasha reaction. That is going to be great!!!!!! Is kagome going to turm into a demon or sess going to be imune to holy powers? Oh BTW InuYasha came out with a character profiles book that give some info on the characters in the anime.

Kay- Sun 05 Aug 2007
Wow, what a chapter. For that matter, what a fic! There is so much character depth to go with the lemons. The explorations of Sesshoumaru and Kagome are immensely amusing as are the accuracy of the rest of cast. Kouga's inner workings are, I think, very true to character. Wonderful work. I can't wait for the next installment.

Tana-san- Sun 05 Aug 2007
Alright girl!!! I love this fic. I adore Sesshoumaru asking to keep her. Reminds me of "Casper, The Friendly Ghost" when he asked Kat, " Can I keep You". That's so cute! His trepidation was sweet. She did in fact say that she belonged to him as he did her but he still wondered. I know that you've read some of ShadowsWeaver1's fics and I think she makes some VERY delicious lemonade and you are quickly making a unique tasty recipe all your own. Thanks for the treat. Sorry to hear about your troubles but this is life whether we like it or not. My laptop got sick again and had me frustrated and behind on all my fics, so I can understand the feeling of not being able to have your internet. Have no worries, you have a good following of fans. You are loved!!! Hugs, Jen

Chaos_Queen77- Sun 05 Aug 2007
What a way to end the chapter, sooooo mean. Any ways i like it so far please update soon.


Annox- Sun 05 Aug 2007
Amazing3 I'v been waiting for this update and I am not dissapointed at all. My greatest soothings for your stress, and for you taking time out of your day to 'feed' our need for this literature.

Many thanks~ Annox

*A-Kay*- Sat 04 Aug 2007
YAY A CHAPTER! After seemingly forever! I'm so happy you updated. Loved the chapter it was great and I do hope you update soon

Sweet_Dark_Silence- Sat 04 Aug 2007
I'm glad to see you haven't lost your touch durring your absence. * Has to move to the South Pole in hopes of cooling off.* Can't wait for another update!

Libertine- Sat 04 Aug 2007
How is it that even thought this entire story is comprised of lemons you manage to come up with a different way of explaining the 'going ons' every time. Goddamit my sexual vocabulary is non-existant compared to yours, pouts, it's not fair! Anyways nice new update, and I see you've added some drama to this fic. Kouga and Inuyasha catching Sesshomaru and Kagome doing the nasty, the horizontal tango, the bump, may prove to be interesting. Her I just thought of three sexual synonyms! Maybe my vocabulary doesn't pale in comparison. Naw, it still does. YAY! They're mates, but I'm guessing there will be alot of hurdles to jump before they get some peace and quite, or they get laid again. Anyways, I'll stop now, but only if you update soon!

Lady Nya- Sat 04 Aug 2007
Thanx for updating again. very enjoyable. update soon, please.Sesshoumaru begging, so cute!

ElegantPaws- Sat 04 Aug 2007
OH and before I forget. Loved Inuyasha's mental blurt about Killing Perfection and Kouga's observation that the Mighty Taiyoukai of The Western Lands is full of shit and has familial proclivities to all things onna hehehehe. I laughed out loud both, going to follow another reviewers advice and head for the freezer.

ElegantPaws- Sat 04 Aug 2007
BRAVA! BRAVA Dear Lady. Sensual to the hilt...AS ALWAYS...ahh Sesshoumaru, she has got ya...but what of your brother and that annoying little wolf boy lolol. Fantastic job! I have so missed this piece. I laughed hysterically at the first bit with Inuyasha's musing re Miroku and then him turning his back on Kouga. LOL!

Just wonderful. See....TRUST yourself :)

Thank you for a blissful read!


serasvictoria666- Sat 04 Aug 2007
I can't wait to see how Inuyasha and the rest of the gang are gonna react when they find out they mated.
I can't tell you enough how much I love reading your fic. It's just so hot! Looking forward to more.

kat- Sat 04 Aug 2007
stupid koga ruining their fun... poor jaken too getting threatened...

very nice chapter update soon, can't wait to read more

Libertine- Sat 04 Aug 2007
Oh my. Oh my goodness, well that was hot. Lol, not much else to say other then it was amazing and sinful Oh my. Well due to my lack of words, I'll have to end my review and go shove myself in my freezer to cool down. Heres to hoping I'll fit, and hoping for another update!

A-Kay- Tue 24 Jul 2007
It's like everyday I check to see if you updated... and it's like everyday I'm somewhat disappointed. And sometimes, I just want to scream because I make myself believe that you have probably updated only to find out you haven't and you know what. I don't like that. So one question... Did you fall of the planet? I mean I totally understand if something has come up in your life that you had to take a break... but I don't think you realize exactly how addicting your story is. Hello... WE love it! And WE are waiting as patient as we can so please, please, pleeeeeeaaaaaassssse!!! Update soon. *pouts* Pretty please with a banana split ice cream with extra fudge and penuts and a cherry on top. (I don't really like cherries, but you can have it if you do! lol)

Please update soon.

Koroleva- Sat 21 Jul 2007
YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!! I have been with out this great fanfic for tooo long already... ive been without your wonderful lemons for long enough!!! UPDATE!!!!

ElegantPaws- Sat 14 Jul 2007
Taps Foot Impatiently....

Sniffs imperiously...looks around screen...walks to the other side looks again...quirks brow, looks at watch...taps foot and screws up lips like sucking a decidely horrid tasting lime...then flicks hair over shoulder and marches out slamming door meaningfully.



angel87- Mon 02 Jul 2007
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE

elvira- Sat 30 Jun 2007
wow..this was awsome!!!...more chapters please!!!

just an evil girl- Sat 23 Jun 2007
A. r u a boy or a girl,
2.awsome story, and
B.please write more!!!!!

lover- Mon 18 Jun 2007
wow...i mean WOW that was so good i hope you keep it up nice job i can not what to see what happens next!!

PhoenixTrainer89- Thu 14 Jun 2007
Just one thing - not too important, but I don't remember the last time Kagome ate…hope you're not planning to starve her to death…how can Sesshoumaru possibly care for her if he forgets to bring her food…?!

Otherwise, very detailed lemons and clear writing. Maybe another flashback to the village would be nice, though. Good luck!

rowdysgirl- Sat 09 Jun 2007
WhooWhee! holy hot tamales! and this is based on your own experiences??? this is really good. and very well written! i'm going to go take another cold shower now.

sesshie- Thu 07 Jun 2007
wow is all i have to say to this story, its very nice and...lemonly! Theres not much i havent seen you do with this story, but i have a friend who likes it how sesshy does, and he has this thing where he has sex with a girl rough enough to make her bleed then eats her out, something about the blood and cum. Or maybe kags could get her period and sesshy lose control or sum10. Then with the her giving him head..... you could have her nippin at him and doin her do then, when he start to cum she plays with his anul whole the way he did her... ya know, reverse what is done...... um, hope i dont sound sick with this, but update soon.

Koroleva- Tue 05 Jun 2007
i loves it that lemon was so fucking hot!!!!! especially w/ all the toys ;) lol update soon i love this fanfic you are so good at visuals ;)

angel87- Tue 05 Jun 2007
i am so addicted!!!! please continue!!! you've got talent!!!

Narcosis- Mon 04 Jun 2007
I love it! =3 Of course prehaps you can sneak in a little suggestion of mine? Something that envovles a full-blown lab dance, and prehaps a bit of 'tag' with his inu?

Faradae- Sun 03 Jun 2007
Hey there! I really like this a lot! If you could, maybe you could add me to the list for updates? I'd love to get an e-mail when you update this!

Lady Care- Sat 02 Jun 2007
I have just a little idea maybe some how you could think of some way Sess can come to the modern area? Think of what could happen!! Oh and I really think that Kagome should become pregnanet but a little later in the story. You should may be make one of there sexual encounters a foursum maybe???

Lady Care- Sat 02 Jun 2007
Wow I totally love this story and lets just say.......I wish that could happen to me!!!

hime jun hi- Sat 02 Jun 2007
I vote that kagome is now pregnant...... and SESSHY asks her to be his mat........ without telling her.... plz e-mail me when you update?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nilee1- Fri 01 Jun 2007
"Damn" That about sums it up. ^_^

Next Chapter please :)

anonnie mouse- Fri 01 Jun 2007
I have an idea for the lemon......Sess could use the fake vibrator thingy in one hole and his thingy in the other....she'll be very stuffed that's for sure!!*hentai thoughts*

Kawaii_Kilala- Fri 01 Jun 2007
OH! i didn't realize that the round cone things was the anal plug...maybe i read it wrong...ah well! Thank you for thanking me and all of the tohers! it really makes us feel good when we get praise for actualy reviewing, ya know?
And i know what you mean about the pain thing! im going to be in serious non-pleasuable pain in about a week, that's when my due date for birthing is, and im dreading it! LOL, but i still love my sex driven husband who seems to never run out of energy!
I just wanted to warn you that i may not be able to review for a while, i'll be busy, obviously! good luck on your 11 chapter (the actual 11 chapter)i can't wait!

Hazel- Fri 01 Jun 2007
Man this is realllly good. i mean they need to bathe but this is reallly good.

Red-Smartiez- Fri 01 Jun 2007
you are VERY welcome!!!

cant wait for the next chapter!!! =D

Chicke- Fri 01 Jun 2007
Great Story so far i love it.

Kai- Thu 31 May 2007
I LOVE IT!! (Can you fall asleep while still kissing? Can you wake up like that? Hmm...)

tilayha- Thu 31 May 2007
my mate thanks u for this story. he has gotten much pleasure from my constant arousal. he has no clue where its coming from but i think ill keep that a secret for now!! update soon please!!

Sweet_dark_silence aka Waddayaknow- Thu 31 May 2007
I do believe you've just raised the average temperature world-wide. Well done!

MorningStar- Thu 31 May 2007
that was... well... that was just fuckin hot.
and people always think i'm a little twisted when i say i like the cat'o'nine tails. sometimes ya need a little pain, ne? especially when you're with a demon god like Sessho.
love the updates, keep 'em coming.

Any9- Thu 31 May 2007
This 2 chapter were like hot rain on the cold earth.
Thank you for updating so soon, and if you can, please, update more.

al- Thu 31 May 2007
as much as i like reading sesshomaru and kagome stories,i had to stop at chapter 8.
main reason:for me,too much high mature sex.
you're going for kinky,and for a mild title,
this story is more than it lets on.
perhaps a wrong rating?
i'd say nc-17.
but otherwise,your writing is well,and no spelling errors.

WiccanMethuselah- Thu 31 May 2007
Ye GODS ... did the hentai demons invade your brain and bless you with unlimited lemons??? WOW ... although it's late and I'm dead tired, I'm gonna go have a smoke now! Whew ... HOTT stuff! Geez ... I think I need some ice too ... WOW. Thanks for a MOST entertaining read, however ... MOST entertaining! I can hardly wait to see if either of them decides to 'fess up soon ... Ok, time to smoke ... again, THANK YOU!

Tana-san- Thu 31 May 2007
Wow...excellent. What more can I say? You got the recipe for lemonade just perfect. This was delicious!!! Jen

serasvictoria666- Wed 30 May 2007
wow. i still think this is one very hot fic. cannot wait for more!

Gryphonwills- Wed 30 May 2007
Very good!

Dragonwitch- Wed 30 May 2007
you r the master of the lemon. i think for the last one Kagome should finally be in her heat and tehy officially mate they get lock to gether. he is a dog after all. could you imagine Kagome's reaction and the fun they could have while locked. theres my hentai suggestion.

kinky_lover- Wed 30 May 2007
I loved it!!! :D i'm so glad u wrote more and i can't wait to read it. i'll try to review the other chappies,but i'm a very bad reviewer jsut to warn u. but i'll try. but that was great the sensations and feelings and actions all asept up to make a great story.

oh Please- Wed 30 May 2007
Ok, I've just got to comment here.... I think you've mastered the lemon!! Wow!
(fans self) Wow again!

Can't wait to see what they do about the other toys, and Sessh's enjoyment of whipping. hehe Does this mean he's "whipped" ??

Can't wait to see what happens with their budding relationship, and his exclamation of belonging to her.

Kami's_Twilight_Angel- Wed 30 May 2007
awwwww > kawaii!!!! that was so awesome, can't wait for more!

i ddnt know how hentai i was until i realized that i recognized and could picture those 'toys' in my mind *blushes* >>

Kawaii_Kilala- Wed 30 May 2007
DAMN THAT WAS HOTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't believe that something as significant as that was could be so full of hot steamy lemon! i swear, im definatly going to need a reallyyyyy cold shower now! WOW! i just can't get over it! and they are still kissing, even in sleep, and sesshy's length is Still inside of kags! AND sesshy said he belongs to her and NO other!
this story -that was suppose to be a oneshot- ROCKS!!!!!
and maybe you should of had her bring anal plugs? hmm? you know, so she'd be even tighter for him? ~_^ UP-DATE AS SONN AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sesshous_girl- Wed 30 May 2007
Love the story and can't wait for more chapters. I also love all the little things details you add. Love your stories and hope you keep it up.

Red-Smartiez- Wed 30 May 2007
OMG!!!! THAT WAS SOO HOT!!!!!!!! THE WHIP!!!! THE VIBRATOR!!!!!! EVERYTHING!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

my favourite part was how Kagome was demanding Sesshomaru to say that he belonged to her! that was SO hot!!!!!! and I LOVED how Sesshomaru woke Kagome up!!!

When Sesshy was going through Kagome's toys, I was laughing when it said that it looked like his pernis but smalller and an odd purple colour! I was DYING of laughter!!!!!!!!!



sfl;sdjfl;j- Wed 30 May 2007
heck I need Ice in there!!!

Ava 365- Wed 30 May 2007
WOAAAH!!! My husband is so not gonna sleep tonight (nor I for that matter!). Isn't it steamy in here!!!

kat- Wed 30 May 2007
damnit i wish i wasn't single right now... i think that may have been the best lemon yet... not sure maybe i should reread the rest and confirm ;)

update soon

ElegantPaws- Wed 30 May 2007
Oh...and in case I neglected to mention as all get out.

"Yesssss...." he hissed. "Harder, my bitch!"


That line was fainting worth....wooof

hazel- Wed 30 May 2007
they need to stop fucking and get clean up lol

man that was good.

Sesshoumaru touch kagome toys lmao

ElegantPaws- Wed 30 May 2007
Superb, intense, warm, telling...well done!

justtasay- Wed 30 May 2007
*blush* I didn't know lemons were on sale... BUT the hentai fest is just begining!! Loved it and ummm... he chose her on his second but he hadn't reached day 3... Kagome may not like that... but then I don't think she's in the postion to care quite yet... *chuckle*

Koroleva- Wed 30 May 2007
this lemon was amazing!!!! *passes out on floor from emotions* This is one of the best fanfics ive read in a while! thank you thank you thank you!!!! and plz plz write more i want to find out what happens next!

Any9- Sun 27 May 2007
Mmmmm.... Yami,yami...... . hmmmmmm... realy goooood.
Please don't stop writing. You are realy goooood at this. :)
Please update as soon as you can.

luna- Sat 26 May 2007
wow i realy like this fic plus it seems that you are very knowlaged in the human anatomy.

hime jun hi- Sat 26 May 2007
MAKE HIM say that he belongs to HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Faing- Fri 25 May 2007
I freakin love this!! Omg...write me a story please...well when your done with thi

Hope we can be friends!!


destined2B- Thu 24 May 2007
Loved it! I can't wait to read more. Good Luck with it! ;)

Red-Smartiez- Thu 24 May 2007
okie can i just say one thing.......HOT!!!!! wait....thats not the, how about.....SEXY!!!!!


Very kinky!! I LOVED how Sesshomaru used the handcuffs on Kagome!! THAT WAS SO HOTT!!


P.S. thank-you for e-mailing me


serasvictoria666- Thu 24 May 2007
I definitely loved the lemony goodness! Thanks! XD
Cannot wait for more!

inusbabe- Thu 24 May 2007
Wow! I don't want a cold shower I want something else! HAHA

Little Girlie- Thu 24 May 2007
Yup! I sure a cold cold icy shower.Whew! I wonder if Sesshy is going to mark her soon as his.

sesshous_girl- Thu 24 May 2007
Love the chappy and the story. Can't wait for more. UPDATE ASAP

MorningStar- Thu 24 May 2007
yeah... i'll be needing a nice long cold shower right about now. i have to laugh about the cuffs tho b/c i was just talking about how flimsy those furry handcuffs are.
yey for lemony goodness! it makes me happy! (in the pants)
just two questions....
when can we expect more?
and where is the shower again?

Tana-san- Thu 24 May 2007
For some unknown reason I've been unable to get a review sent on this fic. It's becoming frustrating as this is one of my new favorites and I wanted to give you more praise on a job well done. I am so amazed at the many ways you girls come up with to convey the wonderful act of sex. You are another "pro" at writing such things and I hope to encourage your hentai nature for my enjoyment of reading such things. Jen

hazel- Thu 24 May 2007
that I like it!

I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Wed 23 May 2007
I Loved the chapter contiue when you can and is Kags going to have her dream come a reality I think it will cause it's not exactly obious but I think hes in love with her doesn't everyone else???? Well good chapter can't wait to read more bye bye

babygirl- Wed 23 May 2007
Yes i need a coooold shower. That was a great chap. I can't wait till the next one.

Lady Kirara- Wed 23 May 2007
:P I was just getting ready for bed to. ^^ Two updates in one day. I love you. Haha. Can't wait to see what happens next. ^^

~Lady K

ElegantPaws- Wed 23 May 2007
Let me tell you something....that damn plot better co-operate, cause I thought it was toe curlingly delicous and sinfully delectable. Delicous torture is infinitely better than torture torture..hehehehehe...see, Sesshy eats lots of fruit (snicker and wink).Very very very tasty, keep going girlie! Great about those lovely sinful toys...bring it on. PLOT!!! Behave yourself, your woman is on a roll!

Teh Smexii Dictator- Wed 23 May 2007
Hehehe that is great that Kagome used handcuffs on Sesshoumaru. Now all were missing is a whip and chains and kags can be a dominatrix(sp?) Great job can't wait to read more.

whiteinu1- Wed 23 May 2007
keep updating ^_^

Nikki- Wed 23 May 2007
I really liked what you wrote. I would like to see sess is a little more pain. maybe a sex swing with bonds on it might be fun. but you did a very good job on this one

kat- Wed 23 May 2007
try the blindfold... always fun...

update soon love this story

midoriko- Wed 23 May 2007
OH MY! Thats one great story you got there... :) *giggles girlishly* wow! definatley hot!

Red-Smartiez- Wed 23 May 2007
This is the BEST LEMON I have EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The smut, the forplay, the anal.....the..EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT LIKE CRAZYY!! after finish reading it i was like...I HATE YOU KAGOME!!! LOL!! XD!!

u have to continue. u just HAVE TO!!



Lady Dragon- Wed 23 May 2007
Oh!! Hot, -fans herself-, anyway a viberator, a dildo, and a whip; please! Pretty, pretty please!!

Lady Kirara- Wed 23 May 2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I just read the entire story!!! I cannot wait until the next chapter is up!!! I lurve it. ^^ -goes to read your other stories-

~Lady K

ElegantPaws- Wed 23 May 2007
You know? That was a great chapter...what a lovely way to wake up *waggles eyebrows*.

On with the torturing of that deliciously sexy aristocrat. Particularly loved your inclusion of the rather intimate act of ACTUALLY looking at each other through the throws of passion. Not often done and in so being, far more INTIMATE than the sexual act itself.

Well done Tigger! (sorry every time I see your nom de plum, that is what I think of)...bouncing away now.

Koroleva- Mon 21 May 2007
this chapter was awsome!!! update soon im hooked and your not providing my drug lol!! XD update soon though this is so good you are so good at visual! lol ;)

black moon inu- Thu 17 May 2007
This story is so good. I think I would like to see or read as the case is a s&m chapter but start out with kagome doing it to him first. LOL.

hugs and puppies

gouka chibi fujo- Thu 17 May 2007
thank you ^_^.

now what you can do is have kag tie sess to the bed. some how make her miko powers hold him so he can't move. let her strip tease while touching herself. when naked let her sit on the end of bed and finger herself. when done she can ride him with him still tied up.

after that it is up to you ^_^

serasvictoria666- Wed 16 May 2007
wow. I mean, really... WOW!
This fic is so good! I definitely love the lemons. This one was especially hot. HOT!!!
Cannot wait to read the rest of them.

Waddayaknow- Wed 16 May 2007
(Has to sit on block of ice to cool off) That is one of the BEST lemons I have ever read!

I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Wed 16 May 2007
Continue soon Please and You are so nice your not gonna make us mad by skiping and I'm not a pervert I just think that this couple would really go that far is the best thing to happen and the ending result or the child/children that come out of it are my favorite part any way every one always makes the kids sound so cute :) Bye bye

ElegantPaws- Wed 16 May 2007
Absolutely delicious as always Tiegrsi. Very sexy and I love the hair washing bit too, rather taking requests eh? we mentioned that our Kagome gets to subjugate Sesshy to some about building an entire scene around that...all in good fun of course....where he just has to take it and not necesarily be a willing participant...

It is all about trust...

inugoddesschild- Wed 16 May 2007
I sooo loved it and I must say that your lemons are the best. I'm at school and reading this ain't helping....but to hell with that! I want to screw Sessh..... Anal sex is painful so I heard but I think that I may want to try it. I loved it and I can't wait until you update..


Tana-san- Wed 16 May 2007 hm hm...I'm not an anal loving person but if it's your thing, more power to you. Personal experiences requiring that passage screams it's a one way street but the way your wrote this wasn't gross or overly graphic. You asked for other ideas? While I'm sure you younger hentai will come up with more imaginative things...I like Sess sitting in a leather chair in front of a mirror with Kagome straddling him backwards. Her legs will drape over the armrests leaving her quite open for some erotic mirror sex. Not that this is new, but it's been years plus since I've engaged in this position. I'd love to see how you could write it. So, good going and thanks for the update notice. Jen

sesshous_girl- Wed 16 May 2007
Lovin the story. Can't wait for more chapters. BTW I love your little scenes at the bottom they are also interesting to read. LOL Even if what i just said sounded stupid. LOL.

Any9- Wed 16 May 2007
Mmmm what can I say? I am totaly speachless.
I love the way you write so I think that the idea with the Kama Sutra is good if you are at lost with idea, but just for some little clues.
Anyway keep going and update as soon as your imagination is leting you to write. :)

kat- Tue 15 May 2007
very nice... no fetishes here i just like to read any and almost all lemons... update soon please!!!

hazel- Tue 15 May 2007
wow he went in THAT hole!


Noacat- Tue 15 May 2007
Dude, pick a page in the Kama Sutra and go nuts.

K.M.- Tue 15 May 2007
Maybe you should change the name of this fic it certinly isn't just another lemon. As for ideas how 'bout bondage? No........ reverse bondage. Kagome doing the tying Sesshoumaru doing the squirming lol. Whatever you choose keep up the good work

zenfluence- Tue 15 May 2007
so, will there be any more plotless smut after the four days?? That would be lovely...

~Lakes, always had that fetish for 'em~

p.s will there be any plotted smut after the 4 days also?


tabby- Fri 11 May 2007
I loved the new chapters!!! They were really gret and arousing!! Write more! Write more!!! *smiles*

Koroleva- Thu 10 May 2007
i love this fanfic its so awsome!!

Galadrihm_Star- Thu 10 May 2007
I love your stories!!! I don't realize I'm smiling half of the time when I read them!

serasvictoria666- Mon 07 May 2007
that was so hot! Definitely love your fic and looking forward to reading the rest!

zenfluence- Mon 07 May 2007
oh, more please!!!

ElegantPaws- Mon 07 May 2007
Thank you for the treat of two excellent chapters and a sensual lemon cause it was definitely that. Sensible girl, those strips were meant to be licked...a LOT. Very delicious last chapter. Nothin borin' about either. Oh and loooooooooved InuTrasha hangin' around. Little Brat. My favourite visual of the comical kind was him hanging and Sesshy very dispassionately giving him a good whack like little red pinata lol!

K.M.- Mon 07 May 2007
Yea!!!!!!! I'm so glad you continued this I really like it. I hope you keep up the good work its really cool.

chibilee- Mon 07 May 2007
hey first off, thanks for the email heads up! really appreciated it! glad you are continuing the fic. how long are you planning it to be? hopefully the next update won't be far off. looking forward to it!

elsy- Mon 07 May 2007
Oh my god I love it please update as soon as possible I would like for you to inflict more pain in their sexual encounters LOVED IT

sesshous_girl- Mon 07 May 2007
Love the story and can't wait for more chapters. The way you describe EVERYTHING is awesome

Koishii_Beloved- Mon 07 May 2007
Woot! I had just noticed that you had wrote more and I am so happy you did! I loved it! ^_^


Tana-san- Mon 07 May 2007
For some odd reason I just had this feeling that you couldn't just let this go at just a one shot. When bitten by the smut bug it's really hard to let the itch alone and we all know there's really no cure for an itch this infectious. Does this mean we'll be treated to more of your lemonade??? I've got this unquenchable thirst, you know? After ShadowsWeaver1's "Love has nothing to do with this" the urge to go find more tasty lemonade has been my goal and honestly, your brand is neither too sweet or too tart. This gal likes your recipe. Great job! Jen

Any9- Mon 07 May 2007
I love what you did with this story. Please continue with the good work and please update as soon as you can.

orchid- Mon 07 May 2007
more more more.... will they me mates and piss off inuyasha.... let us know....

lilmoe31- Mon 07 May 2007
I don't know about you, but I am in need off a smoke. I am sweating right now and in serious need of a very cold shower. That was HOT.

Sidhe- Sun 06 May 2007
OH JOY, YOU CONTINUE'D!!!!! You just made my night ::grins::

Mika Chan- Sun 06 May 2007
OMG Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Drools and Dies Happy* lol

Risa- Fri 04 May 2007
Hot and wild!
Really good!

orchid- Fri 04 May 2007
oh sessh is a sneaky one.... heheheheeee.... i think you should write more on this one...... hope u will consider it....

chibilee- Thu 03 May 2007 kagome, i'm speechless. that's probably one of the more hotter lemons i've read recently. hey if you got another chapter i'm ready for it! lol

kat- Thu 03 May 2007
of course i liked it i can't think of a single thing you have written that i haven't grown to like... or liked right off the bat.

Gryphonwills- Wed 02 May 2007
Wow that is the best lemon i've read in awhile, keep it up!

tabby- Wed 02 May 2007
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! ITS THE BEST ONE THAT I HAVE READ SO FAR!!! ^//////^.....Its so *shivers* pleasing...and exciting....write more!!

Teh Smexii Dictator- Wed 02 May 2007
Must read I have read in a long while. Is there any chance you could some how message me when you update?
I am a member just to lazy to sign in nowadays DX

I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Wed 02 May 2007
PLease contiue as soon as you can

K.M.- Wed 02 May 2007
That was not just another lemon that was THE lemon! Yes I said THE it was great I liked that you explained about canine heat before the did the naughty.....LOL I really loved it and that last line be Sesshoumaru...........that was just perfect.

keep up the good work

Winters_Snow- Wed 02 May 2007
For an abuse of a cliche`, that was pretty damn hot. Me likey! =^_^=

elsy- Wed 02 May 2007
I am very glad you decided to continue with the story I will be reading the rest of your stories and give some feeback on them or just praise them. Hope to read from you soon.!!!

ElegantPaws- Wed 02 May 2007
I DEMAND MORE! Anyway, Sesshy has to teach her the Best POSITION for HIS bitch! Hehehehehe....after he is done with you *wicked grin* of course...

Inusbabe- Wed 02 May 2007
Might be just another Lemon, but I think you could throw a couple of more chapters with it. Not much other than her learning proper position and that Sesshomaru was only a day into his heat.

kat- Wed 02 May 2007
very nice... very nice indeed... i'd mess with that some more... make it longer then a one shot maybe... please?

elsy- Wed 02 May 2007
you better do a next chapter I loved it . it was beutiful.

ElegantPaws- Wed 02 May 2007

LOL. Also loved the aside at the end.

Rowen- Wed 02 May 2007
Well Done! I think it's like a law that you are part of the Sessh fan club as soon as you want to lick every one of his stripes you can find ;D

Any9- Wed 02 May 2007
This was excusite! I loved it. But do you realy don't think that need an continuation? It will be realy realy a nice story if you would like to make it.

Koishii_Beloved- Wed 02 May 2007
Wow O.O That was really HOT! I loved it sooo very much! I really hope to read more of your work really really soon!!


DarkAngel495- Wed 02 May 2007

God iTs So iNteNse!! i LoVe it, MinD

If You CouLd MaKe AnoTheR???




Kurai Kyusobin- Wed 02 May 2007
I'd have to agree with the other review... It was lemony goodness. Im such a hentai but hey everyone's got their vices right? Of course they do. YOU should write another chapter. I believe that you did a wonderful job.

Tana-san- Wed 02 May 2007
A perfect oneshot for just another lemon...not too sweet and not too tart...very tasteful and very appreciated. You did a great job.

gouka chibi fujo- Wed 02 May 2007
Noooooooo you can't end it there. let him teach her the right way a inu bitch does it.

wow i did enjoy it ^_^

Mir- Wed 02 May 2007
This lemon was quite a lemon. Are you planning to leave this as a one-shot? Because it would be awesome if you continued it-like finish his heat because he does find her worthy, but Kagome doesn't know it. So, please consider continuing this?

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