| This chapter is hilarious, I can't believe he ran off like that!! I love you characterization of Sesshoumaru in all of his arrogant glory...his thoughts to himself are perfect.
eternityoftears- Tue 29 May 2007
great chapter.
^_^ i think my favorite part was where kagome asked him if he was breathing okay. hahhaha
i loved Sesshoumaru's response! ^_^
can't wait till the next update!
shavostorm- Tue 29 May 2007
| Great job, I'm loving the direction this is taking.I also love the fact that Sess and Kags are slowing falling for each other. Keep up the awesome job!
Solaira- Mon 28 May 2007
| Excellent chapter. The interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome was very interesting and I like how Songo and Inuyasha seem to be saying thing that indicate that their memories may be possible to be triggard. Keep the great writing coming. I will be looking forward to your next update. I really love this story.
Jennifer- Mon 28 May 2007
| this has been interesting and I'm curious to see how long it will take for the spell to break. can't wait until the next chapter is up.
Eternity of Tears- Mon 30 Apr 2007
awesome chpater! The ending was very sweet and cute and i enjoyed it!
^_^ please update soon!
mortefille- Tue 17 Apr 2007
| I feel bad for sota. We know he's a coward but ah they're so mean to him. And she doesn't defend him. Bitch. I love it keep writing. ^.^
mortefille- Tue 17 Apr 2007
| I feel bad for sota. We know he's a coward but ah they're so mean to him. And she doesn't defend him. Bitch. I love it keep writing. ^.^
Jean- Mon 16 Apr 2007
| An interesting twist of a tale. I like it.
.†I suggest you close your enormous mouth before a bug decides to fly in it,â€Â
LOL! My favourite line. Well done. Nice chapter!
DarkAngel495- Mon 16 Apr 2007
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AW..I lOve It!! I waNna kNow wHats
Gonna HappeN nExT!!!.....PleaSe
reView? ThanKs!
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| im going to update b4 the end of the day!!!
He, You and I- Sun 01 Apr 2007
Hm, funny, I read this just the day you're supposed to update. Wey, then I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter! ^^
A very interesting story. =) Well-written as well, though I noticed some mistakes in this last chapter.
He’s much more porn to get hurt than Kagome.
I think the word you seek is "prone", not "porn". XD
But 'tis good all the same. ^^
Hope to see - well, read - more soon!
Eternity of Tears- Sun 18 Mar 2007
woooo sota's back! ^_^
hmm...good chapter, please update soon!
Eternity of Tears- Sun 11 Mar 2007
omg..I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is so awesome and competly rad.
=D
uhm, if it isn't a burden or anything, could you please email me when you update?
I'd appreciate it!
once again, awesome job!!!
chicke- Sat 10 Mar 2007
| talk about IRONIC!!!!! LOL
clock-winder- Sun 04 Mar 2007
milord, what can i do for you to continue this fanfic? *worshipping*
who wants to know- Fri 09 Feb 2007
| This is a great story I think that it shows Sesshomeru's true self. I think this is one of the best stoies I've readed on this website please keep going.
| Very nice!
mangadreams- Wed 07 Feb 2007
| luv the story!!
me and no one eles- Tue 06 Feb 2007
| this is great well writen and thought out keep going
| Sota is such a coward..I hope Sesshomaru helps Kagome!! Plz Update soon or ASAP!!
Ren- Sun 04 Feb 2007
| Ohh! I really like where this is goin, adding another jewel, souta goin through the well w/ kagome. I look forward to the next chapters to come
hime jun hi- Sun 04 Feb 2007
| Have them destroy it, fall into the pool's............ and turn into demon's.................. AFTER Sessshy find's her worthy...................... and MATE'S her....................................... OH and can the shikon have left it's power and control over it to KAGOME............... and unknowingly (to her..... until she suddenly know's what to do in a couple dire situation's) trained her in her sleep......................
ElegantPaws- Thu 01 Feb 2007
| An excellent beginning a definite 10! All to canon!
So far very interesting!
Although for a bit of input I think a little more of description of the surroundings, what other people are doing, etc, would help it. Your dialogue is VERY impressive. In a few places I've seen you missed some puncuation such as adding " ---Those when the conversation is done. Quotation marks ending it.
In your second chapter where Sesshoumaru is thinking you have third person then suddenly you have it in first person and it's confusing for a few moments.
All in all your story is impressive and interesting I can't wait for an update soon!
Great start. please update soon!!
--Silk_worm
who wants to know- Wed 31 Jan 2007
| This was great I give it strait tens but you HAVE to make a new one and soon. I hate cliff hangers and it when people just cut off (like you did) :~( HURRY PLEASE !!!!!!! *gives you the puppy dog face*
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