i love this fanfic and i cant wait till chapter 3 is done, please keep writing!

PLZ PLZ PLZ wright more SOON!!!!!! im begging!

it was amazing!

I liked it write more!

I liked it write more!

hey tell me when u get new chapters in this fic,because sumhow the inuyasha anime and pirates mixed together equals a interesting fanfic that i wanna read ^^

This has a good amount of potential but you lack development and description of characters. There is no goal as of yet and each time you switch POV's there is no names to tell who we are watching. The descriptions are vague and very fast paced.

You need to slow down and spend more time on the individual scenes. We need more insight on the Characters thoughts and NAMES!!!

If we the reader don't know what is going on then we lose focus and get disinterested. I like it so far but i continue to lose focus evertime you switch POV's. You should pick a narrator or a character to follow and stick with it. If you want to switch to other people then you need to lengthen the scenes alittle more to allow adiquite insight to the characters mind.

This is nice but too fast paced, and quick to shift gears. Slow down and describe just alittle bit more the setting and characters.

If you need help just email me and i'll see what i can do...

update soon

Gothic Lust

pretty neat fic pls hurry and update soon!!! *gives puppy eyes*

ja na

Yay!!!! You're back!!!!! ^_^
And you put Souta in the ship!! yay! xD
Gods, no matter where Miroku is, he is still a perv **shakes head** Anyways =D There is always a Sango to "nock" some sense into him ^_^ Can't wait to see what'll happen next; wonder if it's related to Inuyahsa what Sessho is looking for.
Hope see you soom
Ja Ne

I like it. I dont think Ive read a pirate story before. Update soon. ^_^Ja ne!

i like it can you write more pleace

Good work on this! I happened to find the challenge and saw that you had responded, so I came to take a look. It was worth it, too. :)

Hiyas!!
I really like how this story is going ;D
And absolutely can't wait to see what'll happen next. Wonder if Souta is in the story, 'cause you didn't mention him in the family... maybe, if he is, he can be a pirate xD Anyways, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be awesome! ^_^
Hope see you soon
Ja nE
p.s: I don't know why, but I had a random idea, while reading the part of Kagome looking at the sea: "Doesn't she feel like singing while there?" o.O I know it's terribly out of the blue, but I just couldn't get the idea out of myt head, sorry ^.^* lol.
Ja'

Wow! This is a really good story! I can't wait till the next chapter!

please update ASAP!! i love pirates storys!!! ^_^ great 1st chapter

love it want more

this story is awesome ^^

really, i love the way you write its really nice to read

update soon please!! :D

I like the beginning of this story, I really want to see what happens, please please update! :D

This story reminds me of The Pirates of the Carribean. I love that movie and so far I l0ove your story. Please right more of this story. I will read more. Right now it's in my favorites.

I really liked it! I think you added lots of details that gave people a picture of what it looked like and enough dialouge or action so as to not bore us! Yay for not boring me!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really love how you use descriptions! Just enough and not repetative!!!!! Yay!!!!
I hope to see an update soon!!!!!