Kanna37
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Created On: 08/27/2011 09:45:20
It's a Dogs World are mostly unconnected drabbles and one shots, though some are a series of oneshots, like Favorite Author, Second Place, Either Way, and The True Measure of a Man, which will have a sequel. As well as That's My Boy and That's My Girl...
Amber Feedback from randomfan17: Alright, it was just that one where he was already mated that threw me off. Didn't know if it was connected to something else or not.
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Freya Ishtar
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Created On: 08/19/2011 18:02:56
LMAO- no, no, Naraku's not a demon in this one, none of them are, just an exra-special brand of humans. And no, Kagome's not going to spread anything around about anyone, she really can't because she only saw what she saw because she, too, was doing something she wasn't supposed to be doing. She just doesn't know that Naraku saw her, so the better question is probably 'What's he going to do with this information?" Feedback from randomfan17: Yeah, that is a better question, i think blackmail is right up his alley. hehe
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criticat
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Created On: 08/17/2011 03:02:30
Thanks for reviewing! You make me laugh lots I was worried about you getting dizzy, running in circles and all, so I updated! Enjoy Feedback from randomfan17: LOL, thank you!
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Kanna37
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Created On: 07/21/2011 17:25:50
Well, you know, just because Daichi lives in that cave, doesn't mean he never goes out, lol. ~wink wink~ Anyway, thanks for reviewing Windows on the West!
Amber Feedback from randomfan17: Okay, maybe he hits on chicks at the fuedal library and tells them to come check out his stash, lol. Your welcome, i love reviewing for everything you've got!
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Freya Ishtar
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Created On: 07/05/2011 05:42:39
Well, it wasn't simply that she's a virgin or that he's 'a little' older. Both she and Sesshomaru were wary, and even intimidated, by not only their age difference (he's about 15 years older), but also by their difference in position- he's her college professor and not on just any subject, but the one she hopes to have a career in after college. The demon was well aware of all this and preyed upon it- she's just found out that on top of what's already separating her from Sesshomaru he was a husband and a father and if he had been trying to keep a distance from her because of all of this, the actual physical realization on the professor's part of her having literally no such experience before him would have surely caused him some sort of pause or distress. It was also perhaps a bit easy for Nah Rah Ku to put forth this manipulation because Kagome has not been in a relationship before, let alone one as serious as what's been developing between her and Sessh (having always been more focused on her academics), nor has she ever truly been in love, so as intelligent as she is, she can be extremely naive in matters of the heart.
I may have to stress all of this in hindsight in the upcoming chapter, or do a better job of expressing it in that one when I do the revision. :/ Feedback from randomfan17: Okay, that explains it. I hope not alot of people came back like me confused how she saw it that way. Anywhoo, still hope Nah Ra kuh gets excorsised soon so they can sort out the important stuff, like their relationship, hehe.
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GreyEcho
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Created On: 06/08/2011 04:05:06
Don't be sorry. Just keep being your awesome self. Stories get done when they get done. It was a good place to leave off, leaving the reader dying for more.
But yay~! Another chapter. Feedback from randomfan17: I have summer school that i have to go to everyday and my professors are killing me, but i'm glad you like it, i have the rest of the chapters ready to go.
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Freya Ishtar
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Created On: 05/27/2011 19:36:11
>_> ..... all I can say about the next chapter's content is that it's going to go where the story's going to go. This is one of the few parts of the fic that was thought about and plotted months ago. I know this response, in and of itself, can be perceived as a spoiler, but I just wanted to let you know that if it goes in the opposite direction of what you're hoping for, its nothing against you or wanting to go against reader reviews to keep people guessing, but something that's been in the works for a while now. Feedback from randomfan17: Okay, I love your stories with all the twists and turns and unexpected surprises. Even if it's not what i wanted it's what you think that the story needs so i'm cool with that. Please write what you can and most of all keep yourself healthy.
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Smortz
Huggling you
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Created On: 05/23/2011 16:38:09
I really appreciate you catching that mistake! I will change it when I post another chapter WHICH WILL BE IN A FEW MINUTES!
Gah, I'm so happy that you reviewed my story so much... If I replied to every review (which I wish I did) I would easily take up your wall... So ... THANK YOU!
~Smo Feedback from randomfan17: Your welcome, i've noticed other stuff like that but i hate giving off bad criticism of something that i like so i don't tell the author, if you want i'll tell you in the future if i see something.
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Azurena
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Created On: 05/21/2011 19:58:53
Hey!
Just so you know you aren't getting all confused, I wanted to tell you that Akuma is a new character I decided to introduce. I thought it was time for a new antagonist Information on him is soon to come, so just sit tight and hopefully I'll be able to answer some of your questions in the next chapter. Thanks for your review!
Azurena Feedback from randomfan17: Thank you, makes me feel better.
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Freya Ishtar
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Created On: 05/13/2011 19:02:00 Edited By Freya Ishtar On: 05/13/2011 19:06:37
Yeah, it did feel a little like filler, but only after I'd finished writing it, that's the weird part. Unfortunately there was really no way to get from the way the previous chapter ended to what's coming up without slugging through some semi- uneventful side content. I just didn't expect the coffee shop scene to take up 5- 6 pages all by itself, lol. I also had no idea until I was writing it that Miroku's mom would have died a victim of domestic violence :/. Blindsided myself with that one. Anyway- I was gonna draw out that last part and have the scene where she goes and gets him and- as per how they interact with each other when alone- he explains why he's inebriated and then end the chapter on that point..... But I get yelled at for cliffies enough already XD.
And thank you so much for the support for this story, it means so much! Feedback from randomfan17: Hahaha, well it's understandable people are protesting, being cut off in the middle of a good chapter is frustrating. I enjoyed it anyway, i love all your stories. Explaining why next time just gives people something to look forward too next time adn keep coming back lol
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