sorry if I quoted your translation two times ( I usually don't use quotes!! ^_^, so I'm a little inexperienced), I just wanted to tell you that it seems very well done and I hope you will translate also the rest of this dj
Sessh: The reason why a male gets physical desires...is when a female is in heat.
(O.k. this was tricky, because the heat could be interpreted a couple of ways like sexually ready, but it can also mean heat. Because he is a dog demon, I chose heat.)
Kag: What?!
Sessh: The scent of a female in heat...seduces (is seductive to)a male.
Ksg: That's..That's not true!!
Sessh: You doubt me (don't believe me)?...Here (or you can liberally interpret this to be let me show you)..
Kag: Ahhhh....
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Sessh: The reason why a male gets physical desires...is when a female is in heat.
(O.k. this was tricky, because the heat could be interpreted a couple of ways like sexually ready, but it can also mean heat. Because he is a dog demon, I chose heat.)
Kag: What?!
Sessh: The scent of a female in heat...seduces (is seductive to)a male.
Ksg: That's..That's not true!!
Sessh: You doubt me (don't believe me)?...Here (or you can liberally interpret this to be let me show you)..
Sessh: The reason why a male gets physical desires...is when a female is in heat.
(O.k. this was tricky, because the heat could be interpreted a couple of ways like sexually ready, but it can also mean heat. Because he is a dog demon, I chose heat.)
Kag: What?!
Sessh: The scent of a female in heat...seduces (is seductive to)a male.
Ksg: That's..That's not true!!
Sessh: You doubt me (don't believe me)?...Here (or you can liberally interpret this to be let me show you)..
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(O.k. this was tricky, because the heat could be interpreted a couple of ways like sexually ready, but it can also mean heat. Because he is a dog demon, I chose heat.)
Kag: What?!
Sessh: The scent of a female in heat...seduces (is seductive to)a male.
Ksg: That's..That's not true!!
Sessh: You doubt me (don't believe me)?...Here (or you can liberally interpret this to be let me show you)..
Kag: Ahhhh....
xD roflwaffle DITTO!