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rawr... noses bother me... 14 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 13
Hello Dokugans!

It's been a while since I logged on here!
(or post up any stories or art!)


I need some art tip, again.

I've been working on a realistic style... I'm almost there. Just... the nose... xD it bothers me!

This is the sketch I did a few minutes ago, and I need some more opinions.

Be gentle, I've hardly been able to practice these past few months



Mhm... I think her eyes... erm.. eye, is a tad bit too small.. her ears too big, lips too. Or am I just going insane?

Eh, I still plan to color this piece, but wondering if I should make adjustments to her nose?

(Edit: xD I think her jaws are too broad too?)

Misera <3
 
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Re:rawr... noses bother me... 14 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 3
I like to try and draw in a semi-realistic style, so I'll see if I can help a little.

Too small? Nono, I'd say her eye is slightly bigger than normal, her ear may need to be a little bigger/higher (the ear will normally line up with the bottom of the nose and the eye). Her jaw and lips look fine to me. Her nose looks okay too, you could tweak this or that, but noses really are a pain to get right XB

Hm, I think I have a tutorial around somewhere that I did several months ago. Aha, here we go, I'm thinking of the proportion tips in particular.

I like the way your style is looking, hopefully you'll get more time to practice and share ^^
 
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try this and see if it works better for you. though I hope you dont mind the changes i just wanted to show you, if your like me visual learning is always better.
-r0o
 
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Re:rawr... noses bother me... 14 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 13
rOo master that looks uber

I don't mind the changes, heck that's why I posted... xD need some help!


Ty for the tips mina-san

I'll keep working at it!
 
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