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Firelight 14 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 1
This is something I was rather proud of. I wrote it for a challenge and though it got a fair amount of reads it got very few reviews. Perhaps one of you could offer some constructive criticism?

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www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/2261/1
 
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Re:Firelight 14 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 0
I liked it... short n sweet... Sesshou was in character I like that alot... Im not a fan of ooc Sesshoumaru... Anyway, sequel? ;D
 
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Re:Firelight 14 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 1
Thank you. Firelight would be ruined if I attempted a sequel, I could never hope to recapture that intensity.
 
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Re:Firelight 14 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 0
Perhaps... but maybe something like a Sesshoumarus pov could be something to look into... <3 Sesshou ya know
 
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