Hi.. I'm so frustrated right now that I knew I could turn here and possibly get some results.

I'm in need of a beta or something for chapter 20 of 'Persistence'. It's a lemon chapter and I'm having a damn hard time writing it. I don't want to get super smutty or sub/dom. I need someone to look at what I already have and give me some ideas because I'm burning myself out and it's holding me back.

Any takers? Send me a message on here.

ill help if u would like

Love the story so I will offer any assistance I can. Normally I would be great at editing content, however I'm not sure how much help I can be with a lemon.

I want to make sure that I'm not repeating myself because, as I'm writing the chapter, I feel like I'm using the same sentence structure and punctuation over and over.

If you're able to provide an example of work that would be great.

I could take a look at it