Did they leave Shippo in Edo?

Where is Shippo he hasn't been mentioned since Souta has been found?

Grammar and punctuation are things you could bennifit from. Run-on sentences are everywhere, and there are spots where words are either spelled incorrectly, missing, or its is a different word completely - as if you had autocorrect on and it completely missed what you were originally trying to spell and just plugged in whatever it wanted instead. I think a beta reader (proof reader) would be really helpful to you. I do absolutely love the unfolding plot though, and so far the characters seem to be represented wonderfully! I'm excited to read more!

Greetings,

I enjoyed your story and while it was good, there were some factors that I think could have made it better, I know an author has their own take so please do not be offended by my advice. The biggest issue I had with the story was the loose ends and holes in the plot line, as well as the many syntax errors. While you were cheering about Ko's demise finally at the end, he did not seem like he was finally vanquished rather just resealed by the mikos and monks. His rising again made his daughter's sacrifice completely irelevant despite us being told this was the only way for her to end him and if she swalled him why was there none of her personality in the his rebirth in the future? When I said holes in the plotline I can list numerous examples, Sesshomaru's mother orginally had a lover for the general in the beginning of the story however when Inu No Tasho returned she completely forgets about him and acts like everything was fin and her mate did not infact cheat on her with a human and leave her because she was barren and he found his life mate, there was no conflict within her about this nor was there for him about trying to apologize to her and make up. You also stated in the beginning when a dog youkai wants to please his mate nothing with detract them from that purpose however sesshomaru answers the phone at the end while going down on a Kagome, while there is nothing wrong with this it counters the training she had in the beginning of the story. It was also unexplained about Inuyasha struggling with the loss of his limb and learning to fight while his disability, nor was there explanation on his recovery and regain of speech from his comma. Shippo losing his mate and child was also overooked for historical facts, while it was appreciated to revisit history those chapters you kind of let the character development fall to the wasteside. 

            Character disagreements: I loved how smoothly you set Kagome and Inuyasha drifting apparent. I can honestly say it was the best story line of their seperation without Inuyasha going crazy or betraying Kagome and Kagome just suddenly falling madly in love with Sesshomau. The on thing that irked me about Kagome was how docile she suddenly became after being mated to Inuyasha. You spent chapters upon chapters showing us how strong she became but during the big battle she was happy to just review scolls for the army. I get she was pregnant but even after she had the twins, the next war she had a very minor role dispite Ko's obsession with her. My next biggest character irk was Ichiro, he was the first born son and heir to the West yet he seemed to get of easily despite Sesshomaru being the killing perefection and his father to train him to be the next Lord. Pressure in those times were high on protical and regulations, yet he did not have to deal with any of these and had no thought to being the next ruler of the west. For him to decline his birthright due to his the loss of his eye just topped it off because Kagome never turned her back on her duties and neither did Sesshomaru. His character as whole just dissapointed me. 

               The ending: I get natural dissasters occur and you wanted to make it seem that demons were infalable, but to me this ending was an easy out and very poor. At this point you have had numerous Wars, yokais now going into hiding and being run out of their homes due to humans, bombs dropped on them and a human army that decimated three of the 4 major providences of Japan. The point was already made on numerous occasions even in the beginning of the story. For them to survice all that just suddenly the one time they meet up together again and be drowned seemed unsatasifying as an ending. You could have left off at the ending with Yuji suddenly washing up on shore and his dissapperance be the cliff hanger. However this is my personal view. Good job on reaching 100 chapters and good luck on the rest of your stories! 

Ok I almost didn't want to say anything but yuji is black, and part of an enslaved tribe of "black inu" uhhhhhhhh. Being in such old times I guess this gets a pass. But it's the first time I've seen something like this. Ha idk how to react.

The A/n said gone for good but sealed does not mean gone for good. Even Kagome is hoping it hilds for 1000 years. A seal is not death. And why is it that he's somehow reborn but the female who merged with him wasn't reborn as well when she has the same capabilities?

Sigh this story is a rollercoaster. It lowkey depressing.100+ year of coma, family deaths, becoming mute, loss of babies, being crippled. For youkai they sure are portrayed weak. Loss of a child I can get but 2? Where the second had nothing to do with the first. Sigh it took me about a whole week to get back to reading this. I love the story but damn all this back and forth. Then names and mentions of people that seem to have very little importance in the tale. Its almost as if its being forced, like things are just happening to keep the story alive but it doesn't flow, it lacks a natural affect. Im not trying to be mean im simply reviewing i swear

Damn you cause a lot of trouble in this one

Lol that author's note about Ku being annoying it's just hilarious he really is annoying though.

This makes me smile sooooo much

WAIIITTTT I think you need to correct a few things! First why is the village called Nara? The same name as an enemy, Nara, naraku's daughter. Second how are the twins to stay in Dog form for SIX WHOLE YEARS with a HUMAN MOTHER?! How will she breast feed? But that's not the main thing that doesn't make sense. U said they would look like 2 year olds and yet the dark Inu Lady Mother adopted was like a baby. 2 years olds a kinds huge and walk by the time their that age so how are the twins 2 but the black Inu in human form is seemingly a few months old?. Plus its kinda sad for Kags to not even get to hold her babies, as babies except that one time. I m just confused and sad

Wow that was one hell of an ending. I truly didn't expect that. Though I have to say I enjoyed this story and am glad to see it finished. Ku has to be one of my favorite villains. 

i took my time and read this story and i'm glad i did. it was well worth reading. i loved it from start to finish. the characters grew as i read this fan fic and i'm glad u wrote them that way. it gave them depth and feeling and a great love btwn the ewo main characters that was felt as i read the story. keep up the great writing and i'll c'ya' l8r. bye

thanks for this beautiful story! i prefer to read complete stories, but i started this one a while ago and then i waited for you to continued....it was worth it!! i really enjoy it, thanks again

greetings from Mexico! god bless you and continue writing!

You wrote an awesome story.  I have a way of keeping readers on the edge of their seat.  I love happily ever afters but I know that this ending was perfect because happy ever afters rarely occur.

WOW! What a dramatic ending! There are not many writers, that have the courage to end a story with a cliffhanger and not with a 'happily ever after'. I like it, though I have to confess it leaves me itching for a sequel, but that was your intention, wasn't it? (:-) Well, I'm looking forward to your new stories.

Thanks for a great fic! You are awesome! You did a great job writing this! Good luck with everything!

Oh man!! What a cliff hanger! That is sheer torture not knowing who did or didn't survive but I will bow to you as the author and that this is your creation. Can't believe that it's all over. I'll be looking forward to your next story. Cheers! 

Yeah! They got him all sealed up and safely put away. And your story has been nicely tied together. I like how they have refound Rin, Miroku and Sango. Oh, its bear not bare (sigh...sorry. Misuse of that word on this site just makes me a little crazy).

Good chapter. I was excited to see that Rin, Miroku and Sango reincarnation were back. Now Kagome has her friends back. Good riddance to Ku.