I am enjoying this so far!  But I would just like to call attention to the fact that dogs/wolves don't actually have alphas. It's an all too common misconception. Here is an interesting article about how some primates do:

https://www.discovermagazine.com/planet-earth/the-science-of-alpha-males-in-animal-species

Wolves are just families though. There's no real alpha or anything. Just parents and their young.

this story was great loved it thank you.

I enjoyed this story! Thanks for sticking with the writing and sharing of it!

I enjoyed the story and I am glad in your notes that you did mention that you chose that type of ending because everyone had survived everything and indeed life is not always about happy endings. I still find that bringing back miroku and sango and rin a bit odd.....Rin would of been sent into the system looking for any known relatives before adoption would even be considered.....Yuki being hidden for so many years is also odd. He could of done his job not in hiding but then again his family never listens.  I enjoyed the story despite the plot holes or inconsistencies! Good Job!

So Sesshomaru never tried to use Tenseiga on Rin?

Ichiro turned down leadership and his birthright due to physical appearences? Thats kind of vain...... Oh well.

eh.....major injuries and deaths in this story dont hold any shock value at this point because no matter what stupid moves the group makes/happen they get ressurected.....Seiji had me gasp and mourn....Eiji would of totally had me scream no because the family ignoring his vision would of been the reason of his death and they would of truly blamed themselves.....I still adore the story so far.

and eveyone survived.....yay i guess? No concequences for defying a vision from the kami!

It would be quite interesting if main cast would actually die and stay dead for once....other then dying peacefully of old age *rubs chin* the pack was told to stay home and no one listened

good job parents at not listening to your son's vision at all and going off to war.

that is quite the aging....from kids to full blown adults....how many centuries have been removed from their lifespans?

I didn't want Seiji to die.....and it sucks that Kagome was basically rendered useless in all this....She didnt even use her purification powers or anything!

Xue was awesome and I wonder how many Sesshomaru will he able to bring back with his sword once its all done and over with

seiji is awesome <3

I hope she dies >.>

I'm surprised if Kagome has found out from Kouga what happened she hasnt run to Sesshomaru about the survivors instead ran off to blow off anger. Then again people are irrational when emotional!

I am loving this story so far and I love that for once Sesshomaru's mother is on Kagome's side off the bat. I am also loving all these secret passages!

wow great beginning and I feel bad for Fa. It's cruel to name a son after their own father if they are such a horrible being.

This story was amazing and it had a wonderful ending! Happy Easter!

Koga's child returned to his human form as an infant so why do Kagome's children have to stay in Inu form for 6 years? I'm really enjoying reading this but there are quite a few spelling mistakes, wrong words or names and some inconsistencies where stated facts of storyline didn't stay true. 

Please don't believe that my stating any of this means I don't believe that this is a great story because I do. It just doesn't seem right to compliment a story and not be honest. I'm looking forward to reading more of this and I hope you continue writing other stories. I really enjoy powerful Kagome storylines.