Seriously, I hate Sesshomaru, Rin and Sango in this story.  Sesshomaru has to wake up and get a reality check.  He always boast himself as being honorable.  HA!  In this story, he is nothing but a selfish, cheating and cruel a-hole.  Rin is nothing but a slutty, self-centered, spoiled-brat.  Sango is a backstabbiNg, lying, slutty whore.  I hope all three will get what's coming to them.  The way they treated Kagome was uncalled for.  Also, I think Kagome needs to be stronger.  I hate those three characters, but can't wait to see what happens next.  Hopefully at the end Kagome will have a happy ending.  Please update soon!

Seriously, I hate Sesshomaru, Rin and Sango in this story.  Sesshomaru has to wake up and get a reality check.  He always boast himself as being honorable.  HA!  In this story, he is nothing but a selfish, cheating and cruel a-hole.  Rin is nothing but a slutty, self-centered, spoiled-brat.  Sango is a backstabbiNg, lying, slutty whore.  I hope all three will get what's coming to them.  The way they treated Kagome was uncalled for.  Also, I think Kagome needs to be stronger.  I hate the those three characters, but can't wait to see what happens next.  Hopefully at the end Kagome will have a happy ending.  Please update soon!

Can't wait, I so just want to smack the bejeezus out of the three of them. Gah!?!

"would free him from the disastrous decision he had so naively made in marrying Kagome Higurashi."

I dunno....he seems pretty sure that he doesnt want her anymore. What miracle is going to happen to change his mind? 

Will he see her as soiled goods since she was sexually assualted? Or will he not believe her and accuse her of being loose.

Yay an update! Nice chapter although I'm waiting for the unveiling of Kagome's situation..

I hope Sango gets it right back to her along with Sesshoumaru and Rin. Poor Kagome :(  If you wanted me to feel sorry for her ,well, you've succeeded! I despise Sango. Sesshoumaru and Rin need a reality check big time!! Kagome is pitiful. How could Sesshoumaru not know or care she never came home?? He's a sick-o!! I really am enjoying the story, you're making me think :p

All of them are a-holes. Seriously. i hope Sango isn't forgiven and that Rin gets a tongue lashing and Sessh gets his heart fractured by Kagome. I can't wait to read what poor Kagome will be like after what happened. Will she go to the hospital and will they have to call Sessh? If they do call him, I hope he doesn't get to see her. He doesn't deserve it. 

I am going to be honest: I hope Sesshoumaru and Rin eat shit

You would think with Rins past that she would be more caring, and that she would be a better person than her past tormentors. Obviously she's a spoiled brat that needs to get taken down a few notches and personally I think it's long overdue that Sesshomaru do it. He should've reined her in years ago like the dog she acts like. Psychological abuse can change a person, but even this is way too far and she should know better. 

Sesshomaru should remove that stick from his ass and admit that he fucked up. Everything is his fault (or so it seems so far) Kagome deserves better than him and even though I'm not the biggest fan of the Inuyasha and Kagome pairing I'd gladly take it over how cold he constantly is. 

I feel like Sango or Kagome will end up pregnant. More likely Sango. Sango would get pregnant on purpose and use the baby to try and take Sesshomaru away from both Kagome and Rin

Wow! Such cruel people, can't wait for the next update. Thanks for the chapter

Love! Keep up the good work!!

Sango should stop referring to herself as Kagome's best friend. She's no longer qualified to be one as soon as she started lusting over Sesshoumaru. I laughed when Sesshoumaru immediately locked the door right after she closed the door behind her. lmao! And gurl, do you expect him to be all dramatic, chase after you and assure you that everything's alright? Not all dreams come true, bitch. I am definitely enjoying her misery right now I can't bring myself to care even if she's acting that way because her father hates her or whatever. She's shitty person, period.

Sesshoumaru, still a filthy, cheating asshole. Cheat on a good woman, you will get a bitch you deserve. I can't wait to read more about why thinks he's naive for marrying Kagome. Whatever his reasons may be, it will be just as shitty and weak so he can go kick rocks.

Rin is horrible. I think she is projecting and Sesshoumaru better bring her ass to a psychologist. And she better bite her tongue after she said Kagome's gonna have a baby along the way because that's just cruel. Methinks if she learns about what happened to Kagome, she will not feel sad at all. I have a feeling Kagome's misfortune will be gossip fodder for her & her gang as well -- I don't see her emotionally attached at all with Kagome based on what is revealed so far.

Kagome doesn't deserve these shitty people in her life. She needs to cut them off and not forgive them. I am okay with friendship between Kagome and Inuyasha. And if she ends up marrying someone else, it's probably good for her to meet someone new and not connected to her past.

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next one!

a different take on kagomexsessh story. Isn't it too much though? domestic abuse, adulterer etc...it seems that sesshomaru will have to crawl back into Kagome's good graces. And if I were her, I will never forgive him for it. 

You did great. I hate this story (rin sess n sango charahter) so much but can't help myself from reading. I really cant imagine how you going to turn this around as so much puzzle you throw in there. But i hope rin, sess , n sango get what they deserved. As a reader that emotionally so into your story i beg you not to reconcile kagome back to them. Please.

Please don't take this as a flame but this story is very frustrating for me to read.  I don't see any redeeming characters in this story and Kagome is just too much of a victim for me.  I don't even want Kagome to go back to her husband and honestly having her raped on top of everything else was just too much.  I know your updates have been sporadic but I think I am going to have to take a hiatus on reading this story chapter by chapter.  It's just too frustrating and moving too slow for my taste.

Now that my angst at the story has been aired, I really appreciate you as a writer and commend anyone who writes and shares their creativity on fanfiction site so don't stop writing.  This story is just not personal cup of tea.

Yes, back up and running....please longer chapters and make sesshomaru feel hurt and beg for forgiveness later on!!!...p.s rin needs to be slapped and sango needs to be beat up!

Is Rin in love with Sesshomaru or something?  I'm really interested to see where you're going with this story.  I hope that Kagome starts showing more of the traits she had in the show/manga.  If Sesshomaru thinks he made a mistake in marrying Kagome then I hope he sets her free asap and then he/Sango/Rin spend the rest of their lives in regret.  

God I hope Sesshoumaru suffers. I really, really do. I know it's on Dokuga but dang. Hope she doesn't take him back. And hope she isn't pregnant. That would suck for her.

Welcome back. I cannot wait for the next update. I still do not like Sesshomaru, Sango and Rin for what they had put Kagome through. I still want all three of them to suffer.  I still feel sorry for Kagome. I hope she gets the help that she so desperately needs.

Last time I read the rape scene Kags was calling Asshole who was being a faithless bastard. I was hoping to see his reaction to said miss call as he was getting his rocks off with the slutty ex bf. My question is whether Sessho has yet to check his phone or what? Other than that Sessh is a confusing anamoly I get the idea that the beast is is in love with its mate or atleast cares about her but the human side again is an asshole, I am confused b/w what his true feelings are and this mystery is killing me! Granted, this may be revealed later on and I hobesly cannot wait for it.

My only constructive crticism is not the length of update time so much as length of the chapters. I think the update time taken is enough for a longer and fleshier update. I don't think short chapters work for this story given the setting and plot structure. To put it differently the chapter length as it has been so far is at least one chapter too long. The shortness of the chapters in this emotional rollercoaster of a story is choppy in terms of a reader's emotional involvement. In other words by time the reader emotionally gets attached (more so) to chapter its already done leaving me berfet. CONSISTENCY!

Other than that, keep writing and keep doing you girl, CANNOT WAIT for more. :D XD

Cheers!