I find the plot to be interesting. I hope to see more from you soon.
Next chapter will make us unman Sess... okay, I better prepare myself. lolol
Here's hoping Kagome embarks on an 'eat, pray, love' journey -- and that at the end of her sabbatical meets a wonderful, funny, gorgeous man that will sweep her off her feet. I hope she won't easily forgive Sesshoumaru, or Rin for that matter.
Thanks for updating and eagerly looking forward to the next!
Yay thank you! I was waiting to see where this is going.
So.... honest feedback, he gives me the impression that he's a sadistic asshole even though he loves his wife. Otherwise, I don't see how he went from fond memories of her to belittling her (the tail between legs thought) in the span of a few minutes. I wonder what crime Kagome commited that leads her to where she is now.
This story is interesting because of Rin's part, but setting up the mean Sesshomaru this way may be difficult to justify later, because if you love someone..... you simply don't hurt them emotionally and physically. Unless he's got psychomedical issues that is. But I trust you to surprise us with plot twists and more heartbreaking things! And yes, I saw the long road you had envisioned in your tittle :)
I'm not nagging.... but that was kind of short for such a long over-due update haha. Please write more!!!! *pressures*
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Mar 2016
Well damn aint Rin Rude.
I really look forward to learning their history and seeing Seeshomaru come to his senses
As well as see how the Rin situation will be sorted!
Very interested, update soon!
misa (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Mar 2016
I am absolutely loving this fic! Cant wait for more!! Pls update soon..
Lea (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Mar 2016
"Un-man" Sesshomaru? Oh no...I hope that doesn't equal to him cheating on dear Kagome. I sure do hope that Rin gets some good ol' fashioned punishment though for her disrespect. I wonder why she's acting like a bitch ot her own mother...would it be the influence of some harpies? Hmm. interesting enough! Hope you update soon!
Boy! Rin has turned into a thirteen year-old spoiled bitch! Sesshomaru is no better! Kagome needs to just get as far away from him as possible and grow a backbone and some independence! Then perhaps both Sesshomaru and Rin will respect her more!
Sesshomaru should not have slapped Kagome. And as for Rin wanting to put that out in cyberspace for her friends to see and laugh about because she hates her own Mother....Rin has just proved that she is hanging out with the wrong people! Especially if they think that Sessy hitting Kags is funny! Obviously Sesshomaru approved of Rin's behavior towards Kagome because he didn't say anything against it. He just wanted her to go to her room to get her out of the way.
What a sad sad mess.....I hope it improves. For Kagome's sake anyway.
Zyren (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Mar 2016
Both he and Rin are complete and utter assholes. I don't think I've ever hated them so much lol I hope you make them grovel before Kagome comes back!
Didie (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Mar 2016
Oh, no worries! I already decided to un-man him since the first chapter! *clenching a cutter tightly*
And for a bonus, I shave Rin's head off! Impudent child!
He and Rin will pay!
Oh yea, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned... LOL!
I wish you won't make it easy to win back kagome's hand. Because he won't understand what the meaning of his life in kagome's abandonement.
This story is really different with your others and I really can't wait for the next installment :)
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