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Ashatan (Chapter 4) - Mon 24 Aug 2015

Omg! I wonder who is who is the Leaders and Heads!?! 

 

Please don't leave me hanging for 2 weeks!!! I'm going to be so anxious about this story!!! Hahaha


Susy V (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Oh my GOSH!! What? Dang, a breeder for the whole clan!? I thought just ONE man. Can't wait to see the curve balls you throw at us!

 


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Hahaha I can guess who some of them are but wow!! I like the story so far and I can't wait for an update. Honestly I am enjoying this more than the other one!


sonja hand (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Scary thought Awesome work short but Great thx


DSS (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Next chapter please what happens next and besides sessh who is she breeding with?


Samara (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Dum dum dum... I love it.  It's a great read so far.  And thanks for posting a bunch at once and not leaving that cliffy.


hana sora (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015
I just hope sessh doesnt share her with another member in his clan. . .

Glxydragon (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I can't wait for her to meet the clans. Thank you for the update.


Kahdejus (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I can not wait for more please hurry up. I love this story so far.


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

oh my... she has to reproduce with all the men of the clan, wow... 

it's going to appear another youkai like Kouga or Shippo?


BlueRibbon98 (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Hi SweetKit,

 

I hope you do finish the story that I have hit a wall with. In regards to Pearl's review.... She/he can hate the story if they want. I was not shaming those that had multiple partners. I just wanted it to be clear like in many other stories that scent is very important, Exspecially to an Inu. So have a great time dabbling in fanficction. I hope all goes well. I like the little differences so far.

 

 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

i'm very intested in this fic, but if your going to have theis become a 3some for Sess/kag/Inu, please say so now. I know i'm not the only one on this site that's not fond of those kind of surprises. Even if it is a Kagome Sesshoamru, and Kagome/Inuyasha as different pairings.

I may not be on this site as much as i used to be but i'm still nto fond of inuyasha the character. I'd rather know now then be very upset later.


Rina (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Aug 2015

I wonder how she'll meet Sess and if she meets any of the others there and if they remember. Update soon! :)


Rina (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Aug 2015

I like how this story is different from others I've read, such as the future being changed because of the wish and how Kagome's not lashing out because it's not something she's used to. Keep up the good work and hope you update soon! :)


Saeko (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Aug 2015

You've pretty much copied half of the opening chapters of A Breeder's World (By BlueRibbon98, the story is here http://www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/444/1?author=885 for those of you reviewers who haven't read it). You've made some of the technology different, but the scenes are almost the same.

Make the wish? Check.
Wake up in a high tech future where women are breeders? Check.
Deal with new technology in both home and transportation? Check.
Have Mom there to answer questions and be confused when Kags doesn't know things she should? Check.
Go for a physical? Check.
Get a mental test to see if she's lying about things she's being asked? Check. 

You're basically writing a fanfic about a fanfic.

You've made it interesting enough that I want to read more, but I'm really hoping you start to diverge from the story more.

(And in response to a previous review by Pearl about slut-shaming in the original story, you need to remember that the rules were framed around youkai sensibilities more than humans in that story. I didn't see anything inherently wrong with the setup of the rules - the author didn't slut shame the girls for being sexually active before marraige, she slut shamed them for doing so before the test and then being pissed that other girls didn't. Remember the glares the girls who wore darker colors were giving Kags in that story? Though the wearing of the colors was on the shaming side - having to flaunt how many people you've been with via your wardrobe wasn't the best idea - it got across the point.)


Scar-bby (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Aug 2015

I passed over this story yesterday but I decided to read it since it peaked my curiosity. I'm glad I did, I've enjoyed this story so far! I am very amused with your picture of the "future" it reminds me of what people in the 1950s thought the 1990s would look like.  I very much enjoyed KaGomes willingness to go with the flow instead of lash out ( like other stories). It shows her confusion on her situation and it's funny. Great job, I cant wait for the next chapter! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

wait! all the future changed? wow... that was unexpected! this story is really interesting, I would like how Kagome meet the inu brothers again. or how she meets sesshy again XD

 


KCM12883 (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

I read a story close to this but they never finished it!! Soo please update soon! I can't wait to see Kagome meets the brothers again ! I really like your writting style and can't wait read more!


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

I am getting further excited with each new chapter. I look forward to seeing where you are going to this story. 


Ashatan (Chapter 3) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Oh man! I bet she tested really well. I can't wait to read more about this! 


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