I wasn’t sure what to expect with this but it was really great. I feel a little bad for Inuyasha but he kind of did it to himself. Awesome work.

I like the story. There was pretty good world building. The end felt a little abrupt but was overall good.

One of the few modern day fanfics I enjoy  thank you for writing it

Thank you for finishing this wonderful story and I am looking forward to reading more of your work

How much time has passed in the story? It seemed as if her brother was just starting high school and now he is graduating? She have birth so quickly and got pregnant again so soon that it appeared as if only a year or less had gone by since she only had to wait 9 months before getting pregnant again but her first pup seems very mature and independent already before the twins were born. Did more time pass? Everything is so advanced but they didn't know she was having twins?

This is a very good story. I think I recall the first version being very descriptive compared to this one but I understand that this is basically a rewrite of a story you began years ago. I'm very glad that you chose to finish it.I noticed that the parts with Inuyasha and her have just been glossed over with no description and I can only guess that you have your reasons. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing what happens next. 

This is an interesting story and I recall reading it long ago. I'm a bit confused about this chapter as it showed them dealing with the day after Kagome spent her first night with Sessh but it ended with Inuyasha and her hanging out and I didn't understand him taking their clothes off doing nothing and her falling asleep. Did I miss something?

This is weird how Kagome is taking all of this in stride. She didn't even bother to see if she can use the well to go back to SJ or her "real" time. 

Enjoyed it very much. Great job. 

The story is well written and the world building is great but I still think Kagome is an idiot. If were magically transported to a world with the breeding system id rage against it like crazy. I cant help but feel like she traded her children and self for a better life, even if she had known sessshomaru and inuyasha years ago, 500 yrs is a long time and people  can turn in to monsters and she just signed away her soul and body to be used without question; that makes her a bit ooc for me. She's vert maternal and independent so i have trouble seeing her agreeing to a situation where she'd be nothing more than a broodmare.

This was a good story I added it to my favorites. though it took me a little to get used to the whole Breeder Program thing just the idea of it rubs me the wrong way somehow. LOL it was kind of kinky. thanks for sharing your stories with us.

Aww sweet ending

Good tale, the concept, very unique, the writing could use a little work, and overall one of my faves

Omg a bit freak out and inpatient here! Just woa!! This js an intense interesting story! Breeding with more than one male and they are like sister wives but brother husbands lmao!! Its very nice to see a double standard that the world has an issue with be discussed in a well written tale. I look forward to the other chapters. I can't believe i have been here for so many years and only last year discovered this writer. I honestly love her

Interesting concept, but the contract between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is too ambiguous.  It raises issues of consent, liability, and obligation.  All of which fall heaviest on Kagome to produce an heir, ensure her own fidelity, and commitment to her contract.  All of which is signed without her having a lawyer while Sesshoumaru does.  How can she therefore understand what's required of her if she's not aware of her own legal protections, if any that she has?

She knows what can happen to her if she breaks the contract.

She can die.

What if Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha break the contract?

The repercussions are not clear on Kagome's part.

It seems that she has zero legal protections contractually.

To make such a decision, especially for a lifetime contract, seems to be flippantly told in-story, as if Kagome signing that contract isn't important or significant, considering what she's just signed on for.  She's willingly given herself over to become a surrogate for someone else.  Do her children have any protections?  Are they still hers, or are they Sesshoumaru's?  Will she be their mother or nothing at all?

It's not clear if the contract is like a marriage, or is it a surrogacy arrangement, or something akin to a farmer choosing a broodmare for his prized stallion.

The issue of consent is huge if Kagome is a minor, and nor only newly 18, and making such a decision without legal advice and guidance.

Conditions for a contract would always be negotiated before signing between two or more parties before everything is set in stone.  After that it's legally binding.  And in Kagome's case that's doubly true. 

For me these factors both break the plotline and leave it on shaky ground.

Without that stable base, I can't believe in it enough, to be curious enough to read more.

I think it was a very nice ending. Sorry it is over and I loved every bit of it. I will be looking for more stories from you in the future if RL allows it.

Excellent writing.

Awe I'm so sad it's over!!

You can't tell me that it's ending right now, It's just getting started :( *Crying.. I loved this story and thank you for sharing this world with me. I hope that you will come up with something as fascinating as this story. -DevaG

Great story, and I am glad to see it come to fruition.  Keep up the wonderful writing for future stories!

Update? This story is too good to leave it hanging at what seems like close to the end.