My oh my! I did not see that coming. I love the confidence Kagome is showing and she really seems to be the hunter and Sesshomaru the prey! She's got you cornered now dog boy, what are you going to do?

The stories Kagome tells about her childhood, I also enjoy them. It really lets me know more about this Kagome, how she gets her perspective and her feelings. I think they give a lot of insight and add to the tone of the story. 

Ah I love this cute Inuyasha, so sweet. I just think he's so adorable. I want to tickle him too. I also kept laughing after that joke about her shacking up with him, hahaha so witty! Thank you for the update ^__^ I can't wait for the next one, as always :)

Let me start with the opening bit that always touches me the most. Gossip mongers, hypocrites (as you said), and close-minded women. I am filled with disgust at such people. They cast stones and teach their children to hate. Not the sort of mother a child should be proud of. That last part was so strong. ‘People aren’t blind – they choose to close their eyes.’ So true, unfortunately accurate. Willful blindness is the worst sin of all. I know you can’t weigh sin, but this is just wrong on every level. The ‘innocent’ are not innocent when they turn a blind eye. You are guilty in MY eyes, regardless.  

Now, onto the rest of the chappie! I enjoyed this update more than a little and more than a lot. It’s both fluffy but wicked in all the right ways that make me burn and want. It wets the appetite for more, you give the promise of more, yet withhold it. Cruel authoress that you are! And yet you know how I love the suspense of shared desire, the denial but the knowing that it is there.

I know I should be gushing about Inuyasha’s cuteness, and he really is, the adorable rascal. However, I get forestalled when the little guy wakes up and is desponded over the fact that his mother’s scent is no longer in the house. Instead of saying ‘aww, cute!’ I’m wanting to say, ‘aww, come here, little man and let me hug you and squish you close’ cause I don’t want a child to feel sad. And look! Kagome does better than console him—again. She makes him laugh and forget his sorrows. Gotta love this woman. Though she does not want children, she has motherly instincts and is responsible when a child is under her charge. Just goes to show that you don’t need a child of your body to know that child is yours—in a way in this story—and to love the kid anyway. Blood does not equal family, and despite anyone saying to the contrary, Kagome has become Inuyasha’s family—a surrogate mother, whether she likes it or not.

I can see that Kagome is somewhat resentful of the fact that she has to play the mother again, to sacrifice and give, to nurture and care for another being—a small defenseless being that cannot care for himself. Despite that, she cares for him anyway. Being selfish is human nature. I don’t give a flying f**** what anyone says. Everyone is selfish, so if they want to cast stones, might as well hit yourself first.

Now, let’s get back to the gushing with Sesshomaru and Kagome! *sequels* That ending scene was the best part between these two this chapter. A verbal sparring mixed with Kagome literally getting the upper hand by climbing on top of Sesshomaru. *nosebleed* Great mental image. Especially considering he let her move over him. He wants her there, but will he take the lead next chapter? Can’t wait to find out!  

@_@ i m officially stalking this fic checking it out every once in a wile $_$ hoping a new chapter wil appear magically 

I just simply love love loved this chapter can't even express how much their small interactions their meetings  <3 <3

oh my. How deep. I think I never read anything so deep about Sesshoumaru. Wow, you're the first... to actually know what sess thinks.

It's liberating . Awesome writing, as always! You sure do a great job intriguing your readers!! ^^

So beautiful... thanks for the update :)

Oh my,  I have a churning in my stomach reading.this chapter.  It's so awesome.  The last sentence drowned me and filled me at the same time.  The dictionary I see is a necessity   when reading your chappies, though I understand your usage of the word I want to no know the definition

  You use words like one drinks water.  FLAWLESS!

 I am literally Floored by this stpry, the intricate detail into their emotions for one another,  the dance they knowingly and unknowingly wind around each other as well is beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

So Cute.

Thanks for Sesshomaru's POV, it great!

I love your vocabulary and how you use it to spin a rich vivid narrative. Thanks for sharing.

Really looking forward to seeing where this story goes! The present tense is usually something that I tend to shy away from as it often sounds awkward, but it works somehow with your style of writing. 

When Sesshomaru expresses his inner most thoughts, it is as if it were a soothing soliloquy caressing one's mind - enticing, tantalizing and evoking one's own beast along with the one that threatens to free itself from with in him. I could read this chapter four more times. In fact I probably will. Sesshomaru is falling hard as are your readers for this tale. Phenomenal update. Thank you so much!

Amazing chapter! I think I have just melted where I sit. Sigh...such a tentative dance here. he is becoming addicted to her. And it just slipped right under his skin. I really like that he revealed his true self to her. Thanks so much for this lovely update. Cheers! 

hmmmmm so is this going to be a sad story or a HEA?

I hope they find a way to be together.

Though I am dying of curiousity, what will Souta say when he sees Inuyasha? And will the rest of the gang appear?

I forgot to review the last chapter >_> I did read it though and loved it too. And this one, I just love all the interaction words don't capture. It really tells more of a story than more fics do. I love that this chapte had a lot of Sesshomaru's perspective and he has a certain lady on his mind whether he likes it or not. I also do appreciate Kagome's foresight on asking Sesshomaru how to raise a inuyoukai pup correctly, she is really a great mom I totally agree with Sess. But she is a independent stubborn woman and that's fantastic too!

ah but dear Kagome it WILL get complicated hehe

How will Souta take that Inu is living with Kagome?
And will you have the Tama involved in the story?
What about Shippo and Miroku and Sango and Kirara?

oh my my~! It is getting interesting! mmm I like it! I just hope that you don't make Kagome fall in love with him so quick. In fact, I hope she is much stronger to his sexual innuendos and sexual temptaions. lol~ Some of your stories really make Kagome so "googoo ga ga" over him being such a jerk. I think Sessoumaru needs to get a taste of his own medicine! ha~

btw, I still love all your stories. i can't wait to find out how their relationships unrevel. Kudos for your excellent writing and update soon! ciao~

and she still hasn't Seen what Sesshomaru REALLY Looks Like.

Ooohhh, this story is so delicious.  I think I would like to read more