It has been quite a long time but I enjoyed the update. Hopefully a new chapter will come soon.
Kindness my ass when there is a stipulation to assisting a person. More like a loan. I’ll do this for you if you do this for me, type loan. People are such conniving douche bags… I could go on a complete tirade on the subject! But I regress. The intro to the chapter, as always, guts the reader with such insight into Kagome’s past, memories that are filled with bitterness.
I must first say I loved Totosai. The old coot is such a riot! Much laughter is to be had with this old codger around.
But what I find most beautiful about this chapter is how you described pain when Kagome was questioned Sesshomaru about his father’s affair. So eloquently scripted, yet brutally forthright about the damage emotional pain can cause a person. And yet somehow… it ends in a sexual innuendo of Sesshomaru being ‘trapped inside her’. Naughty, naughty, aren’t you, my devious author friend? Hoe deliciously done! I don’t know how you did it honestly… I envy this ability of yours so much!!
Sesshomaru’s mama is one piece of work… so contradictory, which makes her character fascinating. And an unknown, as one will never really know what she is capable of or what she may do. Unpredictable. Lethal female. Kagome should tread cautiously around this woman/demon.
…And that last part, especially that last line. You want my heart, don’t you? Ripped it right out of my chest, you did. Poor little Rin. Poor Sesshomaru.
Lovely chapter! So glad to see you back in action, and more to come in the near (very near) future! <3
Ankita (Chapter 7) - Wed 04 Nov 2015
T_T I MISS THIS FIC SO BADLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEEEE NEWW CHAPPIEEE XD NO MANNNYYY MANNNYYY CHAHPPIE
Mulata (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Aug 2015
Hey, great story! I know it's the first time I'm reviewing it but I am just a terrible reader, I read and read and forget to leave the proper reviews, sorry :P This story is great! Really! I have been keeping track of it and I got really anxious for the next chapter everytime. Great writing style you have and I really like the different "theme" of this story, full of antiheros (I don't really know if this is the right word for it in english), your characters seem amanzingly humans. Congrats!I sincerely hope you continue with it :)
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Jun 2015
Nice! keep up the good work.
Love love <3
I love/hate your story. Love because this is the first time I've read a story where Inu is taken in by Kagome that is well written. Hate because you have left me hanging and I want more. Thank you for writing a well written story. Its been a while since I've read one (that I'm not currently reading.) Please update ASAP!!!!!
Just a really nice chapter. The way it flowed was very satisfying and the beautiful words you used, who can resist the charm of phantasmagoria when used in such a way. You always put such depth and feing into your stories. She practically has to drag it off of his lips but he finally answers her questions. Maybe not to her entire sstisfaction but he does reply. And yet, there are still so many unanswered questions. It's like watching a rose unfold in time lapse. Oh and more joy, a visit from mother. Love that cherry on the top. Cheers. Thanks for making my day. Hugs!
Aziza (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jun 2015
Loving this fanfiction as always. I really can't wait to see shippo! Him and yasha would be cute playmates...squee
Saiya (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jun 2015
Aww. SHIPPO YAHOOOO
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