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Mona (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 May 2015

Please update soon, I enjoyed reading the new chapter


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Wed 13 May 2015

Nice chapter, keep it coming. I made a mistake on the poem I put Good took when it was suppose to be God took, so here it is again with a new one.


How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!


M- is the million things she gave me.
O- means only that she's growing old.
T- is for the tears shed to save me.
H- is for her heart of purest gold.
E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining.
R- means right, and right she'll always be.

Happy Mother's Day!

 


Tana_san (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 May 2015

I am impressed with the details you're using which throw me right into the scene as I see through Kagome's eyes and having experienced haughty, impolite people in my life too, I can understand Kagome's feelings toward how she is being disregarded by the females she had seen at an earlier point. I, too, always tend to greet people I come up next to when waiting for an elevator and I smile even if I feel they prefer to not talk to me. It's something I was taught to show your best side even in an uncomfortable situation. You can certainly tell when someone, a stranger, wishes to be left alone or has already decided they wish you weren't there in the same place as they are. Hm, well I can tell anyway. So when Kagome's powers started to rise in the elevator I thought perhaps her spirit knew something and was just protecting her even though she wasn't actually conscience of it.

Looks likes they are some rivals in this group of females all applying for jobs. I can imagine the trouble that these 2 females will cause if they qualify for a job. As I am sure, I'll bet everyone is wondering about the woman Rin who walked in. Kagome felt something when Rin and she looked at each other. I have to wonder as all probably are, is why Kagome was forced to forget that time that she went to fetch Buyo from the well. All this time Kagome has never had interaction with youkai and yes, I understand youkai tend to keep to themselves, but to never come across these people until now? Hmmm, curious.

You're doing a great job dropping small hints throughout these beginning chapters. I love trying to figure out where you're going with this before you actually tell us. I am intrigued by the mystery.

Hugs and kisses,  JEN


Tashi (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 May 2015

Another great chapter, very detailed. Things have certainly heated up. I can't help but to wonder if the administrator is the same Rin from Kagome's past. Mmmph! Those youkai females are very interesting, maybe I am getting ahead of myself, I just can't help the curiosity. When I hear red headed female, right away I thought of Shippo, then wine red eyes and I thought of Naraku. Family perhaps??? Update Soon!!!


Tashi (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 May 2015

I am thrilled that you have started another story. The chapter gives the impression that a conspiracy is involved, so much mystery surrounding her memory lapse. Please continue, I love long stories that do not give away everything by the first chapter.

I like also the descriptive flow and the plot itself. There are so many avenues that you could explore with this one, and I do not agree with your comments. Your fics do not start off slow, every chapter serves a purpose and is of the right pace. I look forward to the next chapter.


Halcali (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 May 2015

Hmm, I really wonder what happened in the past for the Gods to tamper with Kagome's memory. I'm especially curious as to why her reiki flared, and why a mere glance from Rin made her go all lightheaded. Curious.

It's also interesting to read about the youkai/human dynamics. I love that bit in the story, especially.

Thanks for updating again! You did a great job! I'm speculating and theorizing now, as I type!


DivaG (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 May 2015

It seems to me that this job is very sought after, and it seems this Akane will cause problems when selecting and perhaps even later. Would this Rin be the same that Kagome met in the past? I'm curious.


Blommie8 (Chapter 2) - Sun 10 May 2015
Is it rin that actually little rin in the past? I miss sesshomaru. I hope he came out soon.

No Uta (Chapter 2) - Sun 10 May 2015

Another wonderfully mysterious chapter. This is such a tantalizing tale and only the second chapter. I'm curious as to why her reiki has flared while in the building? What has caused her body to react in such a way? There must be an immensely powerful presence somewhere in the building or could it be something completely different?  I cannot wait until her interview! Fantastic update! 


Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 May 2015

I want you to definitely continue this! There are so many avenues you can go from here...so many possibilities! I am also very impressed with the writing. You've come a long way. I liked the descriptiveness where most just brush over things.

Sounds to me like someone did a number on Kagome's memory, for what reason I'm unsure, but that's why you need to continue to write more. Not all first, or second chapters catch the reader, but I know you and your wickly twisted imagination....LOL

I can't wait for more. This is a short review but don't let it get to you. I'm being urged to eat and to feed my new kitties since I slept all day. PJ hates when I put off eating and seeing as she made it sooo dang hot, I'm reading your fic first and now the kitties want food and mine is waiting.

Gotta go for now.

Love ya!!!   JEN

 

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 May 2015

This story is interesting and I'm liking it, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!


Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015
Hi..glad that you finally came out with new story. I hope the update not too long. So..next chapter please.

Halcali (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015

Intriguing, and I love modern day AUs! Looking forward to the next!


DivaG (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015

Hello, this story seems interesting. I am curious to know why Kagome's memories are lost and if the new reality is really changed at the point that her own family doesn't remenber what has happened in that year she can't recall anything. Or are they hiding the truth on purpose? Anyway good start.


No Uta (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015

I am intrigued. You've definitely got my attention. 


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