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Koree (Chapter 37) - Wed 02 Oct 2019

Great chap 


Tana_san (Chapter 37) - Mon 30 Sep 2019

Wow, I honestly was so tensed up while reading this. Desendants of Sango and Miroku? I wouldn't have guessed, but then Miroku was a rather strong monk.(In fanfiction at least)

Kagome's family actuallly thought she'd leave Sesshoumaru to burn and die?!? How could they, knowing how she felt about youkai and having allowed her to traverse the Feudal Era. I mean, what did they think she was doing there...playing? The Shikon no Tama held youkai and Midoriko within it and when it cracked Kagome vowed to retrieve all of it and rid the world of it as it was a danger for both humans and youkai. Kagome met so many good youkai there. I'm sure she told her mother some of it. InuYasha being the first she met there and he come through the well on a regular basis. Her mother thought Kagome marrying him was alright because "he was half human". What did she think the youkai half was all about?

They surely had no real concept of what it meant to be hanyou..a half breed. InuYasha had a youkai half that could potentially become unstable and go off on a killing spree, but they apparently didn't consider this. Why? Because he was such a ''nice boy" when he was there in the future? InuYasha's youkai half has little to no control when it takes over. At least Sesshoumaru has control over himself. It is a shame that Kagome's mother, grandfather and InuYasha kept secrets from Kagome. It was unfair to her when she'd asked questions after finding she had amnesia and they didn't give her any answers that they knew could help her to get her memory back. They could have possibly prevented Kagome falling in love with Sesshoumaru if they would only have helped her remember and not getting into an agreement with InuYasha. 

It's a sad situation but at least Kagome and Sesshoumaru tried to come peacefully to talk. Kagome now knows where she stands with them. She will be happier for trying. Her family will miss out on any children they have. A mother looks forward to a time of grandchildren and her mother and grandfather threw that out the door(or should I say,roof?)when ji san threw that sutra on Sesshoumaru.

I was very impressed with Sesshoumaru's strength after never experiencing such a result from a sutra. Kagome had no care what her family had to say. She walked into the flames to be with her mate/husband to be. He held on long enough to show them their mistake. Kagome would always choose him. 

Now on to the next trial before Kagome and Sesshoumaru can live happily. Great work, my friend. Even after being away from this fic you continued on as if you never left it and kept the rhythm going.

Love ya!!!  JEN alias, Tana_san


Annie (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Sep 2019

I'm glad they got away safely.  Shame on her mother and grandfather for what they had done to Sesshomaru.


SammyJams (Chapter 13) - Sun 22 Sep 2019

Aw, he loves her, though he knows not what it is 


Krisan (Chapter 36) - Sun 22 Sep 2019

Oh god, this is the worst cliff hanger ever. Thank you for keeping me on edg :). I imagine how would you feel knowing your reader is agitated waiting for the continuation:). Until then. Ciao!


Koree (Chapter 36) - Fri 20 Sep 2019

Wow I knew it wasn’t going to go well but this was another level I did not see coming !! I’m shocked gramps even has it in him to make his spells work , anywho great chap


REDWOLF (Chapter 36) - Fri 20 Sep 2019

Wow, grandpa had something to work (lol)! This situation seems to be going down hill.  Can't wait for the next update.  Exciting stuff going on here! Great chapter! 


anika (Chapter 36) - Thu 19 Sep 2019

Oh wow seshomaru !!!


Tana_san (Chapter 36) - Wed 18 Sep 2019

Hello, my dear friend. Long time, huh? Aren't you just full of surprises?!? I honestly have to say that I didn't see that coming. I mean, I expected that her family might still hold the grudge against Sesshoumaru and therefore Kagome too, but out of all the stories and cannon "InuYasha", grandpa's spiritual power is like that of a Fourth of July sparkler...it spitters and sparkles before just dying out... But this ofuda he had was a total mind blower! Sesshoumaru is able to withstand Kagome's spiritual power like he's blowing out a flame(pun intended), but old gramps' ofuda sets him to his knees on fire!?!!!!! Well done, my friend!

Oh poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru. These two are both tortured old souls. Their lives haven't been an easy walk. Sesshoumaru felt an unusual attraction when they met for a job interview and Kagome thought he was the man she had been dreaming of from her lost memories...neither thought too far ahead other than indulging in this need each felt and from there it inflated into something movies were made of.

You have done an excellent job keeping us on the edge of our seat!

I have to give Sesshoumaru props for putting up with Kagome's almost constant revolving emotions...and now she's pregnant on top of everything. I think he's been pretty patient up until now. The guy has serious issues with odors(youkai and sentitive noses) and she not only vomits in a closed, moving elevator, he uses his expensive jacket and tries to clean the mess as best he could all the while not knowing if his woman is sick and what should he do about it. I love his strength and persistence in keeping a calm demeanor through this...now he still has to take her to have a talk with her family and hope she is well enough and her family has enough love for their daughter(granddaughter) to accept her descision about her love life.... so not happening !!! 

What else can happen? I'm sure you won't make us wait toooo long this time?!? (hint,hint)

Love you lots, Girlfriend!!!!

 

JEN alias Tana_san


R (Chapter 36) - Tue 17 Sep 2019

Phew, that came back with a boom! Thank you for the update! It was painful to read — it’s so difficult to imagine being able to throw away your child in a haze of judgemen without the class or courtesy to listen with an open heart. Perhaps the chapter was painful because there are so many people who have truly been treated so cruelly. Thanks for keeping up with the story and seeing it to the end as you find inspiration!


Annie (Chapter 36) - Tue 17 Sep 2019

Welcome back.  i did not see this coming with the cursed talisman.  


Wynter89 (Chapter 35) - Sun 14 Apr 2019

This story has come so far.    I can't wait to read what happens with the exchange with her mother.   Will Sesshoumaru hold his tongue?


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 35) - Tue 02 Apr 2019

I really love your story. You do a good job of showing all the flaws of the characters and that makes everyone well rounded.  I like how you layer the conflicts in the story, it adds depth and realism. I like how the emotional struggles are an actual struggle that each character has to work through in their own time.


Tana_san (Chapter 35) - Wed 27 Mar 2019

They're both so stubborn and thick headed when they disagree with one another. Though Sesshoumaru is living in the 21st century, he continues to act like he's living in the Feudal Era where the man rules over their females and they have no choice but to do as they're told.

He should understand by now that Kagome, since she returning from her past adventures over the jewel, has been through so much emotional trauma that she needs to stand on her own two feet and work out her troubles. This is her family and despite what happened between them he has no real say in the matter if she wants to go alone or not. He can wait outside and give her the time they need to talk. He'd know if she needs him or not. He needs to cool his temper and help her by understanding that she NEEDS to do this without him.

She knows that Sesshoumaru is only trying to protect her and their child/pup, but she's a grown woman and has to try making her family understand that she is living her life as she sees fit. What they pulled behind her back will not be tolerated if they want any kind of relationship in the future with her and her child.

It's possibly going to get rough what with Sesshoumaru seeking a divorce and his soon to be ex wife wanting to fight dirty, so she wants her family to know she still loves them and probably to prepare them for what could happen. They'll probably hear a lot of dirt on Sesshoumaru's divorce through the media and television and she doesn't need them to get involved in any way or make anymore judgements where he and she are concerned.

I can't wait to see how this confrontation will play out. Hope can update soon.

 

Love ya!

JEN


j (Chapter 35) - Tue 26 Mar 2019

Oh my gosh I can't wait to find out what happens with her mom I'm throughly excited for the next update!!!!!


anika (Chapter 34) - Sun 24 Mar 2019

Wow!! Its nervius!! Continui!!


anika (Chapter 35) - Sun 24 Mar 2019

Oh estan complicados y seshomaru no ayuda como tampoco los nervios de kagome!! Con nervios a flor de piel espero el siguiente capitulo


SmilingFool (Chapter 35) - Sun 24 Mar 2019

Oh my gosh love this story from years ago...  I read every chapter posted again and came to wonder I never did read the ending and I'm an avid reader.  I know the outcome up to the part where,,,,....  Can't let the other readers know what will happen in the next few chapters...  Update soon I truly love the story.


Tana_san (Chapter 34) - Sun 03 Feb 2019

I don't know why this review had me on chapter 1 when I was on chapter 34 and then it kept a really long space when I hit submit... this is weird.


Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Feb 2019

Hey there Girlfriend... Sure have missed you! I figured with the new marriage and job that you'd end up pretty busy. You aren't the only one it seems. There are quite a few that RL has taken away from Dokuga and when they come back they can't believe it's been a year or more so don't feel bad. Did you have to re read it all again? I re read the last 3 chapters since it hasn't been too long since I read this for a second time.

Well, now on with the review...

I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru decided to go with Kagome to Souta's graduation. She needs the moral support and if anything were to happen to her he'd be there to help and comfort her. He was smart in not saying anything to her over how she was acting on the way to the graduation. (not in the car while driving anyway)  I don't think she was even thinking clearly during the ride over as I don't know why she sat in the back seat or opened the door when he always helps her in and out of the car. I figure her mind is just re playing everything they talked about and her feelings over maybe seeing her mother again, a possible confrontation happening, and not wanting to cause a scene on Souta's special day.

He was right in pulling her aside when she started trying to push his hand off hers and stuggling to make him let go. She may feel that seeing them holding hands would anger her mother really but it wouldn't really matter because him just being there at the gradution near Kagome would tick her mother off. 

Texting Souta so he knew she was there and having him smiling at her was sweet and calling him later to make time to see each other before he leaves the country will help Kagome a lot as I think he would only care that she's happy with Sesshoumaru. He may have liked InuYasha a lot but I think he probably knew that they argued in the Feudal Era. Siblings usually always listened in on conversations that they're sent out of the room for. I know we did as kids.

The high school girls fawning all over Sesshoumaru was a real laugh and he having trouble trying to get away from them without making a scene to have Kagome come back to pull him away from the the high school girls was so precious. At least they got away before anyone would see them, especially her mother.

I don't know that I agree with making Kagome go confront her mother so soon is a good idea. Sesshoumaru handles problems head on but is he considering that Kagome has done nothing but stress herself out since all this began? That can't be good for the baby...or her. I get that with going through with his divorce will no doubt get messy and there's potential danger coming their way, but can't he give her just a little more time than a few days to come to terms with all that going to be happening in such a short amount of time? Let her see Souta first and tell him. Maybe he can give Kagome something to go by over how her mother and grandfather have been acting and feeling since she left to stay with her friend. hmmm Guess we'll just wait and see what happens, right?

I'm just so happy she decided to stay with him and allow their relationship time to heal and share the pregnancy together.

I also wondered since Sesshoumaru only married Kiyomi, why can't he mate Kagome before his divorce then after the divorce he can marry her? Just a thought.

I'm so happy you updated...try not to be gone so long this time???? Please????

 

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