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Aviva (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Jun 2015

Hi MS, haven't been around for the longest time. I read all the chapters to your new story last night and wasnt able to leave any reviews because I was offline. Anyhow here it goes. I love it. This story has great potential, so much breathing room to use your imagination. As always I love your writing style, you have improved one hundred percent because you kept at it. What I want to know is what happened to Kagome for her to forget everything. I really do hope she gets that job.


DivaG (Chapter 8) - Wed 24 Jun 2015

At this point, it seems to me that even Sesshoumaru does not know for sure what exactly he wishes to accomplish spending this month with Kagome before Inuyasha arrives. All he knows is that he wants her and he can not keep his distance from her, and he wants a chance with her. He was not lying when he said that his feelings for her were getting stronger since he met her, but he could not say that he loved her because he is not sure that what he is feeling is love. At the end of this month he will have to deal with his deceptions towards Kagome, Inuyasha and his angry wife. He will have a lot of explaining to do.


sonja hand (Chapter 8) - Wed 24 Jun 2015

Woe complex plot intrigued well done


Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Wed 24 Jun 2015
Waw..that was fast update! I ... Xixi..my hentai side like it. Too bad she's in pain. I hope she's pregnant! To proof that sesshomaru is not barren.

Tana_san (Chapter 7) - Sun 21 Jun 2015

We didn't see any real confrontation but I gues when his wife said it's over and she's finally had it with his sleeping around behind her back, she left and he told Kagome to just report to work on Monday as if nothing had happened. But we see that they are both disturbed by what happened and each know after feeling things they felt during their brief time it would be hard to forget but at least Kagome is willing to try and stay professional and maybe he can aide her in her search for what happened all those years ago that no one else will talk about and act as if it never happened. She's still confused and more so now that see actually saw who she thinks she's seeing in her dreams and she knows what she felt when he touched her back.

He on the other hand decides to go after Kagome and explore this "feeling" she gave him that he never really experienced. Is it jealousy that InuYasha has gotten to feel such things, did he secretly fall for the woman from the future his brother talked so much about, should he just stand back knowing InuYasha is coming to find her soon? All these questions are answered when he drives to her home and watches her sleep and feels the pull she has over him even as she sleeps. Sesshoumaru is not a youkai of indecision.

I just knew when she woke and found him there that he would win her affections...this time. Like he says, he has a month to find out but he also has a wife that walked in on their little tryst.

Seriously I just wanted you to finish them doing the wild, passionate monkey dance and not where Momma and GrandPa will hear them and interupt thei fun. I was hoping for a full blown fire fall, with fire works, and the grand dance of the Inu we know Sesshoumaru is and Kagome wants.

Yeah, sound good to everyone else? You can hear them agreeing Moonlight. Let them lay under the Moonlight's Silk tonight!!!!

Gotta know I love ya, huh?   JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 6) - Sun 21 Jun 2015

At this point I'm a bit disappointed. Sesshoumaru knew he was treading on a troubled woman from 500 yr past. He saw she saw him as someone that loved and could help her put her mind back together. She wraps herself around him for dear life and begs him to help her make this right. She 's acting so out of character to the woman/child he knew in the past. The spunky,flighty girl who wasn't afraid of him even when he tried to kill her but this woman, she is the same person but not and he knows his life is already a complicated issue, not to mention that InuYasha was coming back to find her again and make things right between them. Sesshoumaru knew all about Kagome being the future traveling Shikon Miko and an important player in the killing of Naraku. He, InuYasha and Kagome were vitile in the death and total destruction of this evil and something happened to her.

But he allowed what he knew what was the right thing to do be pushed into the back recesses of his mind as she called to him in a way that made him "feel" and when she pressed her lips against his all logic and what was the right thing to do became unimportant because she ignited something within him that he never had happen.

All of InuYasha's talks about the miko from the future and the things he saw when he was there, Sesshoumaru knew his brother was coming to Japan to claim her but why had InuYasha taken so long to do so? He could have mated her but he didn't and now that Sessh has gotten a taste of her and the feelings she gave him so wantingly...he's going to stir up all kinds of trouble for himself and what of Kagome in all this? She's going by dreams she believes are memories and no one will tell her why she can't remember that time before waking in the well. All she has is the white hair and golden eyes staring back at her and she longs to put the pieces together. Did she find her dreamlover? or her memory of what she lost. I think Sessh was the last person she had seen before she disappeared but My memory may be wrong.

Whatever the case may be, she allowed a man that appeared to belong to another woman have his way with her before getting caught, even though Kagome did start it, he knew better and said woman was not too thrilled they got caught but she couldn't just let him take all the blame. She's an adult now and accountable for her actions even though she didn't know why she allowed it to go so far. I sure hope he talks to her and doesn't use her but what Sesshoumaru wants, he takes and the consequences be damned.

Can't wait for the next chapter and I am sooo into this I will read it now. Sorry for being behind. RL is a real drag sometimes but we learn to make due.   Love ya!!!   JEN

 

                                                

 

 

 

 

 

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Sat 20 Jun 2015

Great chapter, keep it coming.

FATHERS

Father's are the strength of the family,
To bond us and hold us together.

Always there to mediate the household,
A determined mentor we look to lead altogether.

He's the bodyguard that protects us,
And give us comfort from all harm.

He constantly offers compassion,
Always offering up his arm.

To stand behind us endlessly,
Though at times in darkness we tend to fall.

He always their to guide us to the light,
For us to follow from his call.

With years to come, day by day,
We grow from the nest we grew.

In hope to became something great,
For I hope to someday be like you.

A Father's love is never ending,
Always there with a heart of pure gold.

Happy Father's Day!


DivaG (Chapter 7) - Fri 19 Jun 2015

Right now Sesshoumaru's life is really messed up. It seems that he has fallen hard for Kagome and, although he knows that what he is doing is very wrong, and combined with his unhappy life, he is unable to resist to live a fantasy of having a happy life full of love, even for a short time. But one month is enough time to mess with someone's head, and Kagome already believes that he is her lost love, so at the end of this time when Inuyasha comes back it will be very complicated for her to resume her life with him and forget about her time with Sesshoumaru, even if she regains all her memories back. Great chapter, keep it coming.


Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jun 2015
Fiuh..finally i can leave a review with my sentence came out. Firstly i hope kagome bear sesshomaru a child or maybe more. Second, hope inuyasha find his own happiness. The last is..i hope the update soon. Please...? Xo

Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jun 2015
Fiuh..finally i can leave a review with my sentence came out. Firstly i hope kagome bear sesshomaru a child or maybe more. Second, hope inuyasha find his own happiness. The last is..i hope the update soon. Please...? Xo

Mona (Chapter 7) - Fri 19 Jun 2015

Great update and i cant wait for the next, hopefully soon.


Blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Jun 2015

Blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Jun 2015

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Wed 10 Jun 2015

Oh no drama, keep it coming.


DivaG (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Jun 2015

He has a wife??? I did not see it coming. Well, at least she does not seem to be his mate, since their relationship is very strained. Things now are really getting even more complicated. Great update.


Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Jun 2015
Noooo...why is he married? Do they have kids? But finally you're update. I hope the next wont be long. Yay..more chapter please.

Mona (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Jun 2015

Finally, I can't wait for the next update.


Tana_san (Chapter 5) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

Oh please don't be InuYasha as I think only he would have the nerve to just open that particular door without knocking. Anyone else knowing Sesshoumaru and his temper would never think to not even knock...or were they so enraptured that neither heard a knock?

Poor Kagome. Was it InuYasha's eyes she saw? Or was Kagome secretly harboring feelings for Sesshoumaru back then when InuYasha would always chose to off with Kikyou? You said overhearing InuYasha talk to anyone who would listen about Kagome, the girl from the future and Sesshoumaru started harboring thoughts about her, so she could have done the same.

Again, poor Kagome. What happened to her when she come back from the past? Did her Mother have her hypnotised for her "own good" as she grieved too much and it was scaring her Mother? Did she maybe hit her head during the freefall back home? or did perhaps the well wipe her mind of ever being there but Kagome's love for those in the past couldn't be truly forgotten and was bound to come to light?

Much love, my friend, you are doing a most fabulous job with this...as always!

JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Jun 2015

"Sesshoumaru!"  Every fic I read has Kagome saying his name when she sees him for the first time... Sorry it's taken so long to get to this. RL sucks sometimes but we have no choice but to live it...though I sometimes wish I could just live in this world of Fanfiction.

I guess Akane, a very spoiled woman by the way, didn't get the job that Kagome got instead and she like many red heads I know, threw a fit because a human got it. Or is it because it was this human she was so angry about. Does she too know Kagome? Kagome collasped because her mind couldn't handle seeing Shippou, right?

Poor Kagome. This must be such a horrible way to live. On to the next chapter but I may not finish until later tonight.

Love ya!!!  JEN


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Wed 27 May 2015

More quickly, keep it coming.


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