It's a good start. Totally grabbed my attention there. Can't wait for then next chapter. Keep it up.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
Oooohhhhh so Good.
Interesting in the least i want more!!!!
Interesting start with a really captivating plot. I look forward to future chapters! ????
tena (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Apr 2015
It reads in a way that sucks you intoo your world effortlessly! Please don't stop!
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