I don't know why but this chapter seems somehow a little bit sad . I can feel Kagome's resignation and sadness as she ignores Inuyasha. Bit there is also a bot of melancholy in her behaviour, like she mourns her lost affection for him. Anyway, it was a nice chapter and I like that you are moving the story slowly .
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
Don't Give Up onyourself Kagome.
Tina (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Apr 2015
Og yes, an update!! The story gets closer and closer to something big happening!! I like how you slowly distance Kagome from the group and make her feel alone - she is ready for prince charming now :-)
I look forward to next chapter!
Elspeth (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Apr 2015
Promising. Very promising. Keep going. I'm curious to see where this will go.
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Apr 2015
That was Awsome.
rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Apr 2015
next chapter please
Aziza (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Apr 2015
I really like where this is heading. That image of feral Sesshy, mmmhm who could resist that? I also love how Kagome plays it out in the end, that's right girl. That hanyou can go suck it, you get your eyes on a much superior prize now ;) I really like you writing style and hope to read more soon! <3
i want more!!
rose (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Apr 2015
next chapter please
Caught my attention ;)
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
InumeT-Flygirl (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Apr 2015
didnt sign in... but how intriguing....very interested...and HOT!
cant wait to see the progression of this story
Literary Fan (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Apr 2015
Noooooooo! You just captured my attention but now I must know what happens next?! Why was Sesshomaru in the forest in the first place. Great beginning. I like how you describe Kagome's feelings so far. How she questions herself for loving someone who is unable to respond to her in the same way. Of course I am rooting for Sesshomaru though. Please, please update soon.
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