Please, please, please, a thousand times over, add some more chapters to this story! Your writing and imagery is simply superb. This is the first time that I have ever left a review on a peice on Dokuga, as IVe been quite the lurker. PLEASE, add a few chapters as I am quite taken with your story line!!
Loving this! Humorous, well written, and generally entertaining, i hope you write more soon!
Loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Jan 2016
Interesting... Poor Kagome, how is she to deal with all this? I can't wait to see what happens next and if Sesshoumaru makes any more moves :)
Eva (Chapter 6) - Sat 23 Jan 2016
Well that certainly has Kagome dazed and confused. I don't think she's the only one. .
! Moar pweesh! ^^ you know how to keep us hanging on the edge here =}
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Sat 23 Jan 2016
Wow Poor Kags
Thanks for the update
tonya (Chapter 6) - Fri 22 Jan 2016
great chapter
You have returned to bestow us your fabulous mind!!! Please continu your awesomeness!
Eva (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jan 2016
It seems that Sesshoumaru is now of one mind when it comes to Kagome. Inuyasha is still thinking he can have both women and continue to treat Kagome badly. This can't be good. In another week, things will really come to a head when nature calls. Canine and human biology are similar in that fertility is preceded by blood in both. It's the frequency of cycles that are different. Miroku and Sango are such an amusing counterpoint to this story. Thanks for sharing.
Ashatan (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jan 2016
I really want to know what's up with Seshoumaru and why he's all beastly when Kays is bleeding.
I look forward to seeing what you have for us next!!!
tonya (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jan 2016
this is an excellent story! please update again soon
Yeah kill her with kisses and bites lol
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Jan 2016
Nope Ship He Wants to Eat Her (Winkwink)
Oooo I like it! Keep it up :D
Interesting story
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Tue 12 May 2015
Wow That was STEAMY/HOT!!!! hahahahaha I Loved the End when she's all like Mother of (screamingunderwater) so Funny. this fic is So GGOOODDDD.......LovesIt!!!!
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