The switch between past and present tense was driving me a bit insane tbh but that's an easy fix
This is a very good story!!! But, personally I think Sesshomaru should lose the fight with Kagome to teach him a lesson about lieing to get what he wants, make him earn her trust back.
Then a happy ending where they mate.
I like your story. I wonder if Sesshomaru will win.
Wonderful chapter, I'm glad she hear the beast out. Sessho sure was stupid though, lieing to a woman with known trust issues XD
Wow, its been a while since I saw an update to this. So long in fact I had to read it again. Honestly this chapter didn't flow as well as some of the earlier chapters. The last several have felt that way. More like a synopsis than the earlier chapters. I was kind of surprised at the content of this chapter considering where the last left off. Though I am happy to see the story continuing. Best I can say is take your time with it. If your muse isn't feeling this story don't force it.
Great update
Wow, well he told a half truth, however I can see why is angry with him. She should makes sure this is all the side effects of the bond.
Shina (Chapter 11) - Sat 10 Sep 2016
So far it is amazing. I am excited for the next part.
Shina (Chapter 3) - Sat 10 Sep 2016
I LOVE this story. Its amazing
Great story so far, can't wait for more!
Well this is definitely an interesting story. Though chapters 9-11 seemed vastly different from the rest. I still would like to see where you take this. I'm still hoping for fluff and sweetness.
Alashia (Chapter 10) - Wed 24 Aug 2016
Sure a great story! I would to found out what will happen when Kagome finds out about the truth of the blood bond. Hope you will continue to finish this story!
So kinky ho is mated to inu?
Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love this story so far.
Brittney (Chapter 2) - Thu 20 Aug 2015
This is going to be interesting! :)
Dani (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Jun 2015
I just caught up on this story and I have to say I really like the time you put into your chaoters. They are long with enough details that there are not many questions to ask. I really like the way you had kagome put a challenge on both but I am a sessh fan so it is good to me.
Googlegirl1 (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Jun 2015
I'm kinda annoyed by how everyone is saying what Sesshomaru did was a good thing. He lied to Kagome.
Story wise, but 9 needs work it was not as awesome as 1-8
THIS CAN NOT END!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST ONE I HAVE READ SO FAR
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