First of all, congratulations to you and your DW. I'm really intrigued by your story. The shikigami are facinating. I want to know more about Kagekiri. At first I thought he was a wolf, but I reread that part and realised he had merely killed it. The demon at the end of the latest chater is also not him. I was tired while reading so a bit muddled. I reread from the beginning and I'm more curious than ever. I look forward to more of as you spin your tale.
Great story and thanks for the update! However, I need to point out that you had Kaeda die in chapter 3 and snice then Edo has seen an increase of demon attacks, but now she is discussing why Sesshomaru took Kagome away from Inuyasha.
Good story though. I can't wait for the next chapter and I will of course be reading those other stories that you have (shamelessly ha ha) plugged at the beginning of the chapters to this story.
I do wonder, though, exactly how much Sesshomaru considers it duty and honor to protect kagome from Inuyasha's shortcomings, how much of it it to simply have a powerful Miko at your "beck and call" at it were, and exactly how much of it is for reasons that.....even Sesshomaru isn't ready to reveal, either to himself, or to others, just yet.
I can't wait to see how this strange relationship develops between the two.
Saiya (Chapter 7) - Thu 28 Apr 2016
Wowzer.
Mona (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Dec 2015
Sounds to me like he wants her body or soul.
I have a guess at the reason he took her... but i wont say it here! ( ; Anywho, great story so far!
SWEET! An update. I feel really bad for Kagome in this chapter. Sorry that you lost your laptop and everything in it. Well, this is better than being a stranger. Can't wait to see what happens next. Come back as soon as you can.
Sarah (Chapter 5) - Sun 17 May 2015
Still not quite sure whats going on and why she's with Sesshoumaru.
No Uta (Chapter 5) - Sun 17 May 2015
Yes, yes , yessss give me all the angst and darkness you wish. It is one of the many attributes I enjoy about this tale.
Love the story so far. Can't wait for a new chapter.
Interesting plot love it
Eva (Chapter 4) - Thu 14 May 2015
I like Kiri. I think that he enjoys the teasing, but really likes the rise it gets from others. I imagine him to be mischievous and wicked, but mostly harmless until his mistress is in real danger. Then he could be malicious and vindictive with only his mstresses hand to curb him.
I'm curious about those Shikigami. And Hanzo is cute. I want more.
and the plot thickens - dum dum duuuuuuuuuuuuuum!
I love the idea of a chibi Miroku. Kagome definately needs friends and support right now. She's hiding so much of her true self, is it to protect herself or is it what Sesshomaru wants?
hmmm intersting interestging, so they are all shikigami? if so maybe they could be the mini version of what Kagome hoped Miroku could eventually achieve. wonderful update!
The old Kagome will always be there, just deeply hidden.
I wonder what Sesshomarus game is? Why does he wish for a vow from her and what will he do once he has it? Cannot wait for more of your updates, your stories always make me think ^_^
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee love!!!!!! this is awesome! I cant wait for more!
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Sun 10 May 2015
This plot is beyond intriguing. I am definitely interested in reading more of this tale of yours.
So what happens next?
Eva (Chapter 2) - Wed 04 Mar 2015
I'm sure we will find out what happened in good time. Needless to say it's too late for me, I'm already hooked. I like your introduction of OCs, although I do hope Sango, Miroku, and Shippo will try and visit.
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Wed 04 Mar 2015
What did Inuyasha Do that Sesshomaru had to take her.
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