A nice distracting read for the morning when I should be doing homework. Thanks for that. heh. I prefer a competant Kagome that can speak her mind but not sound whiny, so I appreciate that you made her so.
I am confused by "tauren" guards. Do you mean like World of Warcraft, minotaurs ala Greek mythology, or taurs like centaurs with human torsos connected to beast bodies?
I really enjoy stories where Kagome is a youkai. I wish there were more
Thank you for your story. For once, i found a wise and smart Kagome that reflected her background from the future, rather than a stupid, always tripped, and not confident Kagome esp in front of Sesshy and other royals ( thats how other authors always portrayed her as. Honestly im sick of it). What a relieved to have found yr story. Keep it up!
Interesting first chapter I am curious about how Kagome seems to be a demon. one thing I noticed is
thrown chair should really be spelled throne chair the first would be a chair that had been thrown as opposed to a chair that is a throne.
Not that big of a deal but it gave me a little laugh and jarred me out of the story when I read it.
Alma (Chapter 11) - Sun 20 Mar 2016
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. It was very good.
Kimmy (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Mar 2015
Amazing. You should totally update With more chapters .
What? No epilogue? I would love to have seen what happened with everyone else, especially if Inuyasha was put on trial, banished, or sent to an undisclosed location to spend the rest of his human life, or put to death for killing the Southern Lord.
This story was wonderful and I enjoyed it, Happy New Year and a Happy Valentine's Day!
I am a little surprised that Kagome didn't come out and ask Sesshomaru why he wanted to mate her? Sure, Kagome is powerful but I thought that in the first chapter he didn't care for her at all? Oh well, so far great story! I can't wait to read more!
Don't stop!! I really like this story. Good job!
Now i just hate sesshy hmm
Sorry about the chapter review mixup, I meant chapter 8 and not chapter 1.
That was an interesting turn of events. I kind of suspected Inuyasha might be involve with the troubles that were going on but not to the extent that he was the mastermind behind the whole ordeal. He got what he deserved. Great plot twist!
Oh, Inu...you dummy...Kagome lost several from her past and her beta betrayed her...she's going to be heartbroken when this sinks in. And if Inu is still alive, wonder if they will put him in prison to about him causing any more problems.
Hahaha woo
Oh Kouga..... You are gonna get seriously hurt.
Kouga....apparently still doesn't understand the word 'No'
getting hooked awesome update thank you.
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