Second time reading this and it stills bugs me that Kagome didn't know this punishment bs even if her mom didn't go through it. It seems like something youkai would tell each other or learn in school. And punishment for listening to your dads harmless request seems like bs. Not mad at the writer or I wouldn't be reading again. Just mad at the characters lol. The writing tone seems a bit fast paced thats my only annoyance. But good story! I even understand rin being upset
Man, I loved this! 10/10
Awwwww! So adorable!
this is a good story. i liked it from beginning to end. these sess/kag pairings are great. i would kind of like to see a show about it. sort of like an alternate story to to original. good writing. keep it up. bye
Okay. I read that Kagome became the heir to her father's throne. I take it then when her father step's down she will become Lady of the East? Does that mean that the east and west will merge?
Question: Is Kagome the Royal Heir to her father's throne [Business Empire]?
1 guest (Chapter 15) - Thu 14 May 2015
I enjoyed your story very much!!!!!!!!!!!!..........great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kimmy (Chapter 15) - Tue 03 Mar 2015
Great story you should at more chapters.
Lorena (Chapter 15) - Sun 15 Feb 2015
I loved this story! I read this all in one sitting, so I definitely wouldn't recommend it when you just wake up and try to fall back asleep, lol ^^ There was something I found really refreshing about Kagome's character
That was so cute, I just imagen then in my mind, thanks for the storyline of my favorites characters hopefully you have to continue writing more.
I really liked the story
me like you to do a sequel to it
That was very interesting.
Aw it's all over! I really enjoyed this story and I think it would be awesome if you made a sequel. Maybe it could be about their life with their kids or something. I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
Debra (Chapter 15) - Wed 14 Jan 2015
Great chapter. I really enjoyed the ending.
Marissa (Chapter 14) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
ok the only thing i don't like is the whole 'punishment' deal like what why would you have to ask your mate to go somewhere. idk maybe it's because i'm a feminist and reading things like that bother me lol. i like when kagome is strong and independent
Debra (Chapter 14) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
Great update. I guess Kagome has a lot to learn about being a mate. It was really sweet how he was so worried about her and only showed her his feelings as punishment. It also says a lot about how he spoke about her towafew her father. Also really glad Rin is ok with them again.
rose (Chapter 14) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
next chapter please
this story this amazing . continue please
rose (Chapter 13) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
next chapter please
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