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No Uta (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Oct 2014

I got a good chuckle from "Demon be gone" LOL. Kagome's grandfather is a riot. Sooooo....she's kissed old icicle ass ay? I like it. Now both of them are confused as all hell. I'm curious to see what Sesshomaru does next. He didn't react to her kiss when it occurred,  however his beast wants her. Will he make the next move? Will Kagome be too embarrassed to face him after that ballsy move of hers? Will ole gramps continue to harass icicle ass?  Tee hee. Great chapter! 


tonya (Chapter 7) - Tue 07 Oct 2014

loved it!


tonya (Chapter 6) - Tue 07 Oct 2014

awesome!


No Uta (Chapter 5) - Tue 07 Oct 2014

"Hm. A cleaning rock." LOLOLOL ahahahaha that...was...delightfully hilarious!  I'm just getting caught up on this story of yours. I'm enjoying it so far. 


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Tue 07 Oct 2014

I don't want to tear into this chapter, as it is sweet, but this bothers me quite a lot, as a classicaly trained singer.  Classical music wasn't even heard of during the feudal era.  The earliest classical music, Baroque, wasn't being composed until the 1600s. Before then, it was Renaissance music.  There is no way Sesshomaru could have heard any of it before, even if he was in Europe.  The modern piano wasn't even invented until almost two centuries after the events of Feudal era, around the year 1700, so the closest thing he might have been acquainted with is a harpsichord or organ.  The really great music written specifically for a piano wasn't being composed until Mozart, which was almost 3 centuries after the events in Inuyasha.  Even then it wasn't a piano being used, but a pianoforte.

If you are refering to classic Japanese music, you should specifiy it as such. The term 'Classical' does not cover anything being written in Japan.  I don't expect you to change the chapter as a result of this review, but this chapter so greatly disappointed me with the historical inaccuracies I had to say something.  'I wish you would' is all I can say.


tonya (Chapter 5) - Mon 06 Oct 2014

great chapter!


Midian (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Oct 2014

Fun start keep it up


tonya (Chapter 4) - Sat 04 Oct 2014

excellent. thanks for the update!


tonya (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Oct 2014

awesome chapter! looking forward to next update


tonya (Chapter 2) - Fri 03 Oct 2014

on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. update soon!


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