Loved the flyfy! *-* xD
The only thing that I would recommend is slowdown a bit with kagome touching Sess! xD Don't take this the wrong way, because I love those parts! However, she’s not an inu and she also doesn’t have a “relationship” with him yet! So it’s a bit strange how can she feel so comfortable touching him all the time! It’s understandable, since we all want the same thing! xD But it’s strange!
It would make more sense, for Sess to be touching her all the time! *-*
Thanks for the update! <3
Mia (Chapter 4) - Mon 19 May 2014
You made me tear up! So awesome! I can't wait for more!
marisel (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 May 2014
this is real good- what are the chancex of everybody leaving in dc.
Hehe. Enjoying this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Great, keep it coming.
Sheila (Chapter 4) - Sat 17 May 2014
It's always good when Sesshomaru shows up...great story. Thanks for the update :)
So excited to see what happens next! One of the best fics I have read.
I absolutely loved it (: great job. There were a few minor grammar errors, but nothing serious (: it seems you're getting the hang of it (:
-MissKatt
rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 17 May 2014
next chapter please
mari (Chapter 4) - Sat 17 May 2014
i really really like it so far thanks.
I enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. I'm glad Kagome was able to reconnect with her 'Fuedal' family. I can't wait for your next chapter. Update soon!
Zyren (Chapter 4) - Sat 17 May 2014
YAY!!!! I really love this fix so far, can't wait to see how it unfolds. Please update soon! ??
Great introduction to the other characters and giving Kagome peace about Miraku and Sango. Looks like the pack can now be complete...now to see the bonding begin and the drama unfold. Great job!
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