I always enjoy when you update this story. I had fun with their interview. You still keep Sesshomaru in character as always. Though he's come around. He is still...who he is. What i absolutely love about your writing.
When you were describing her clothes, you spelled 'heels' wrong. Also, are you deliberately changing Shippou's back-story? His father was killed by the Thunder Brothers, not Naraku. If this change is on purpose, you should at least mention it in author's notes.
Other than that, this chapter was cute.
Episode 2 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Great chapter, keep it coming.
Nilee1 (Chapter 14) - Sun 13 Jul 2014
Great chapter. I loved the interview format. Element of suspense -- wondering if the live interview would turn into an attack or indictment as happens so often these days. You are doing a wonderfully.
Like OMG!!! Youkai Paraliment!!! I cannae wait!!
Tierney (Chapter 13) - Thu 10 Jul 2014
Loving it keep up the fantastic work!! I hope some citrus is I our future!! XD
Very good chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on Saturday, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Mia (Chapter 13) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
Awesome chapter. The press conference made me tear up! :)
mari (Chapter 13) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
Awesome update thanks.
I find it interesting that there wasn't a voice of dissent among the crowd of reporters. Maybe the flipside of this battle, the Purifiers, will be represented in some questions asked in the interview.
Hope the next chapter is soon in coming!
Szira (Chapter 13) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
Aw! Such a cute ending for them! I look forward to your next update!
No Uta (Chapter 13) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
YAY!!!!!!! How I've missed you & your story! I understand real life can get in the way. It is the reason I have stopped writing myself. Now I take what little free time I have to read fantastic pieces like yours. I laughed so hard at Kagome's handling of Inu Yasha. I love how you keep him in character. I also enjoy that even though he already has a mate, he still harbors some jealousy. Yasha & Sesshomaru fighting as they always do keeps things true to their character. Also, the your portrayal of Sesshomaru ' s behavior on camera, sending a clear message that she belongs to him through his stance is believable. He was very protective of Rin in the anime series. I can picture him being just as you described. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Great work!
Zyren (Chapter 13) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
This chapter gave me chills. So beautiful.
LOVED IT! I like them being all cutesy
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