What a spectacular ending! It was above and beyond what I envisioned it to be!
I have to say my favorite part, although is was somewhat dark, was Sesshomaru's reaction to seeing Kagome for the first time in half a millennium. The "flinch" and his "dazed" look "as if she were a ghost" were amazing touches.
It made his longing seem more genuine, as opposed to him saying "I missed you mate" or "you have returned to me"... or something as cliche as that. Although there is nothng wrong with those phrases, Sesshomaru's silence was heartdropping. When Kagome reached for him and he flinched, I fliched with him. I inhaled sharply when she finally touched him... GOOSE. BUMPS. I felt every emotion.
I liked the fact that you didn't brush aside Sesshomaru's paranoia in the end. Because he has everyright to be. It will take time... a lot of time for him to even consider letting her go off on her own. It's not like she was dead for 4 or 10 years... it's been 500 years! Sesshoumaru is scarred! He was depressed. You made the story believable, and I loved every word.
*applause* Very well done, my dear!!! I am proud to say that you have captured my attention from begining to end, and kept everything so beautifully written! Brava!!!!!!!!! ~Sandreline
nia (Chapter 30) - Fri 06 Jun 2014
finally!!! gyaahh, i love you authorrr!!!\>,</
you really did a great job! (thumb)
sound cliche but sometimes we need something cliche, right?!:3
i loved the epilog...
wwuaaahh finally... (blink blink)
can't stop smiling and maybe i'm going to get diabetes mellitus...
thank you for your hardwork (bowing)
congrats for you authorr!!! (yey)
if i could give you chocolate then i would... (depressed)
i really enjoyed (and still do when i read again) the story. :)
thank you again for your hardwork!
YuzukiC (Chapter 30) - Fri 06 Jun 2014
As cliche as it sounds, nothing can express my enjoyment and love for this story :) it has been a wonderful time following the entire series of Masked Truth. It is a brilliant masterpiece, one that is truly touching. All in all, great story well written! Looking forward to your future works!! :D
Holly (Chapter 30) - Fri 06 Jun 2014
ok frist off let me say i loved it second off you actually made me cry with the last couple chapters i can not recall ever crying that much with just one story. it broke my heart how such a strong demon crumbled so quickly but then sense he is a dog demon i could understand they fearsely loyal like any normal dog but dam i still cant get over the fact of how much raw emotion u have put into fhis story and i love the fact that you kept him to his real character from the manga and anime but have this deep understand between kagome and sesshoumaru how shd could look past the cold face and demeanor that he protrade to the ones around him to actually see for what was truly underneather i have never read a story that has captured me so fully before within the fanfiction relm im truly gald and sadden to see this end and i hope u find it in ur self to carry on this if only to show hows how theif doing after their pups r born
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