And so there goes the final end to the best created adversary on Dokuga. Neikan was fun while he lasted~ though as he became more insane I started to wish more that he was dead already. Oh and sorry I've been slacking off a bit on the reviews, things and whatnot are always keeping me busy with finals being over now but this story is always a bright spot in my days. I decided to make up for it though for doing multiple reviews instead of packing it all into one~

This was one epic battle is what I can mainly say. It had me rushing over some of the words just so that I could see what moves Neikan would be doing. Its a shame that so many human lives had to be wasted but at the same time I was almost freaking out and thought that Sesshoumaru might actually die for once (I feel really bad for the general however...what an awful way to die). Kagome was a total heroine in this chapter though, even if she had been doubting herself towards the end but that is fine because not all heroes are perfect right? It kind of reminded me of Sailor Moon actually because it was like the power of love and sacrifice winning out in the end. By the way you did an amazing job towards the end when Kagome was closing in on Neikan - it had me literally holding my breath, anticipating what the outcome was going to be. I was elated when I saw that she was able so successfully destroy him but then was like"Wait..NO...WHAT?" when she started disintigrating as well! It is quite cruel of you to leave the chapter ending in such a way -_- but it was brilliant at the same time. Just brilliant. There is no way things can just be left like that though, right? I mean, its Kagome. Besides, she was carrying out a task that ultimately should have been up to the Gods to handle! They can't let her be punished by death. Inuyasha of all people is happy. Inuyasha! She and Sesshoumaru deserve to be as well.

Either way however this was a spectacular chapter and it was the ideal way for Neikan to perish. I think I hear applause in the background, bravo and well done. I don't think I've been anticipating a chapter more than I will be anticipating the next one. Keep up this epic work.

Cheers~!

Cute! This entire thing was just cute (And I'm talking mostly about chapter 23)! Both chapters were sweet. I'm sure I have already told you that you have the sweetest Sesshoumaru and Kagome pairing on Dokuga and you still do. I'm practically getting a sugar rush.

Well everything was cute up into Neikan butted (In chapter 24) in but I love and hate him anyway. I laughed a bit when Kagome literally rolled out of bed and couldn't help but think "idiot." oh but that's not really her fault. After all don't most of us get that way when we are in love? You're portraying Kagome perfectly if this is the case. I would actually love to see the two of them mating as soon as possible but unfortunately Neikan is still in the way! Nothing good ever comes out of rushing. Its nice however to see them getting even closer. I thought it was sweet the different ways you portrayed Sesshoumaru caring about Kagome with the little things he did for her during their journey. Neikan is doing things just like Naraku again, its kind of creepy. I have a feeling though that his end will be coming soon with the next chapter perhaps?

Anyway you've done a splendid job with both chapters and every word is worth the wait. You do an excellent job with pacing and leave the readers wanting more every time.

What can I say...

Takashi is kind of awkward in this chapter but it is understandable. Again poor Takashi, he's really taking things a little too hard on himself but he seems to be taking it all in stride at least and Kohana is there to help cheer him up! Kagome and Sesshoumaru are a bit childish, taking a couple of days before one of them finally decides to reconcile. It was cute though! And I'm elated that the two of them are finally official. I'm sure no matter what despite being placed in the back Kagome would be able to be an important asset; besides her ultimate objective is to defeat Neikan anyway. Though Sesshoumaru's sorrow over Kagome's plan was practically heartbreaking. You did the courting scene well, it was beautiful. I usually have more to input and at this point would say "I'm anticipating the next chapter" but luckily for me there are more to tackle. Onto the next one~

WTF?! How can you just end it there?!  Gah!

I am more impatient than InuYasha waiting for his ramen! I want the next chapter asap!

Brava on it, by the way! This story is going to get an award for sure!
~Sandreline

*heart breaking*

OK!!!!! i seriously feellike crying!!!! KAGOME!!!!! n poor SHESSHOMARU!!! what happened to her!!!??? Did she return to her own time!!!?? did dhe get sealed or did she seriously die!!! (horrror stricken) , i hope not the last one, this is not a tragedy rite?

Can't wait to know!!! PLZZZ update soooon!!!

omg no!!!!! she better be able to come back to him!!!! i can't wait till the next chapter now

WHAT???? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! TT^TT you can NOT leave things like this and spect to seat, and wait for an update! please update as soon as possible, please, HAVE MERCY ON US!!!

*breaths in* *breaths out* *breaths in* *breaths out*

I love the battle scene. And wew, even though I don't like the nameless Southern General, I am sad to see how he died like that.

*sends virtual bear-hugs to Takashi and--er, Sesshoumaru, that is, if he is merciful enough and doesn't beheaded me*

argh! i want to be soooo mad right now....but it was such a good chapter that i possibly can't be  so please continue! loved it :D

neikan is powerful her it is huge 

Poor Kagome,

Maybe she will figure out that this had to happen? That without her interference it might have been worse? Also, there's the thought thath the Kami could have always interrfered and given her more power or sent other powerful allies to help "cleanse" the manipulated humans. But the Kami choose not too so therefore, this war was meant to happen this way.

But pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllease let this end happily? You're putting us audience on pins and needles!

la batalla llegó Takashi se fighting junto a Sesshomaru y kagome

the battle arrived takashi will be finghting  alongside to sesshomaru and kagome

Dun dun duunnnn finally the battle!

Takashi is with them right? 

Ps : I love how you portrait sesshoumaru in your story :3

Keep it up, keep it coming.

 

Time to prepare our reader selves for the death of some character....

*sigh*

I always did hate this part.

*melts* So adorable! WHY CAN'T THEY JUST BE A CANON COUPLE SERIOUSLY THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.

Nice, keep it coming.