Dear Sesshoumaru's Secret Admirer,
You are killing me.
Thank you,
Goodbye until the next chapter.
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lol no serioulsy, it was another beautifully written chapter as usual, and I understand the points you were trying to get across and what you are trying to do but I can't take all the pain. The pain Sesshoumaru is going through because it is like I am feeling it myself. I'm there in that Sakura tree with him still mourning the loss of Kagome you'd think I was the one who was actually in love with her! In a way I was like I loved Neikan, I just love the way you portrayed Kagome in this story (I'm sure I might have admitted that at some point) and the way you developed her character; everything from her personality to her fighting style and actions. Its lovely how you are still portraying Sesshoumaru's heartbreak but at a timed pace rather than just jumping straight towards any kind of 'Happy ending' though I appreciate the artistic sense of it I am still being driven nuts by this.
You have turned this Sakura tree into something like a symbol I believe that represents something beautiful and meaningful that is like a motiff for your entire story and I love it because I never even considered it as one until this chapter! I like how you completely made the Sakura tree the star of this chapter because I can see now that it represents not only Kagome and the lovely nature of her character (that you created of course) but it also represents the loving relationship between the two characters. And their history! What you did with the flashbacks was brilliant because it occurred to me that significant memories between the two were often shared right there by that tree practically every chapter and it marked specific important milstones in the development in their relationship; I swear you do brilliant things every time you release a chapter - you never fail to impress me somehow! And as a literary fan it just pleases me to read the wonderful ways your story develops. The Sakura tree kind of reminds me of the Goshinboku tree where Kagome, Kikyou, AND Inuyasha all shared memories together. But that Sakura tree is like Sesshoumaru and Kagome's very own tree with shared history and though Kagome be gone her memory and their relationship will never fade as long as the tree stands; hell from the intense way you portrated his love for her I got the impression while reading throughout the story that even without the tree it will never fade as long as HE is still standing. and that is just so sweet and heartbreaking. The overall mood was captured perfectly as well and as usual - you never fail with that either. Poor Sesshoumaru though! Please come back to him Kagome! Still hoping for a miracle here.
Oh one more thing I wanted to point out that befuddled me a bit. He mentioned her being 500 years in the future and that he could still see her again however I was puzzled in thinking because I'm like....no she died 500 years already in the past after time traveling through the well! Therefore she cannot be born anymore 500 years in the future right..? Or perhaps I'm not interpreting right. Either way I can foresee that you still have more surprises and a master plan up your sleeve and can't wait to see it unfold in the next chapter you mentioned! I don't even need to tell you anymore to keep up the good work because you always do (:
marisel (Chapter 27) - Sat 24 May 2014
another chapter and the end???? so what happen o kag no talking to the kamis???
Lord.... I almos went into cardiac arrest just thinking this was the last chapter :-)! Pweew, what a relief to know there is still more to come!. This chapter I have to say, is exactly how I always thought Sesshomarus feelings were gonna be! Loving to the point of no return, strong, strict, unbelievably guarded, yet romantic, and soft, just for her.... the kind of love that deserves to live on to eternity!! Awww....romantically painful TT^TT love hurts indeed!
As always, its a pleasure to read your work, and I'm dying for the next update, please update soon!!!!
Caitie (Chapter 27) - Sat 24 May 2014
a beautiful yet sad chapter! Can't wait for the next(:
nia (Chapter 27) - Sat 24 May 2014
whuaaa T^T stayed strong sesshomaru!!!! i'm crying now... T^T this chapter is sad but somehow it's beautiful? hummm, i can't find the right word to descrine it
but one thing i'm sure about, i can't wait for upcoming chapter... :)
I'm so glad this story is not done... because No. I can't. please no? God no? *bawls* Poor Sesshomaru! I'm actually depressed right now I just- *sighs*
anyway
You are so talented! The way in which you portrayed their love was powerful. Unlike most stories you didn't emphasize too much on lust or physical attractiveness (not that there's anything wrong with that) and that's what made it so powerful. I love that fact that it is just raw emotions, strong feelings, and this spiritual bond. They strived to understand each other. It was beautiful.
Please update soon (for the sake of my weary heart) ^^
best of luck!
nia (Chapter 26) - Fri 23 May 2014
oh nooo, i can't believe i'm crying now. wuaahh, can't stop!!!!! oh author please a happy ending. it's making my heart breaking. i can't stop crying now... T^T maybe i will mourn untill author solve this story. wuaaahhhh....T^T
i can't wait for the next chapter... whuaaa~ T^T
*sniffles* Sesshoumaru ... *hugs*
I think, no, I bet she's back to the future or something, not dead, right? RIGHT? *looms over the author* *holds hiraikotsu high*
marisel (Chapter 26) - Thu 22 May 2014
oh my you kill kagome very good story but sad so know whats going to happen keep them coming
=(
To sum things up this chapter was just heartbreaking to say the least. I could literally feel the pain the characters were feeling myself as I read. You set up an excellent poignant tone and mood there throughout the entire chapter. No really this chapter was heartbreaking but it was fantastic simultaneously. I practically cried (I would have cried outright but I was in a public place while I was reading at the time and held the tears in). My eyes were watering like crazy though. And then that last part when Sesshoumaru returned and sat near her bed...just...heartwrenching. I didn't need any pictures or anything, I could just clearly and vividly picture the sorrowful imagry in my head like a movie playing out in my brain. I agree with Midoriko, the Gods are being way too cruel too Kagome and Sesshoumaru but I am still holding out for a "happy ending." I'd love to see how well you would portray Sesshoumaru and Kagome after the battle and I feel like there are still loose ends that need to be tied. Oh but I don't want this story to end at all, I love it too much! With great writers like you, who needs movies? (Though if this story would be properly made into a movie I have no doubt it'd be nothing but epic).
Thank you so much for updating as swiftly as you did! It brightens my day each time to notice you have posted up a new chapter and they're awesome every time. As always anticipating the next chapter and what happens next. I've got a feeling its going to be epic just like Chapter 25.
Cheers~
Vivi
this....this couldn't have been the most perfect chapter right now. it started to pour buckets within a couple minutes. if you were to stand outside for a couple seconds, you would be soaked to the bone. i could FEEL that i was with them. so many sighs have been sighed right now. it's amazing. you've done great so please continue :)
van (Chapter 26) - Thu 22 May 2014
Nooooooooooo :'( :'( :'( :'(
Poor sesshoumaruu *sobbing*
A happy ending is a musttttt >:'(
Nicole (Chapter 26) - Thu 22 May 2014
i think im gonna start crying....we need a happy ending
saddest chapter i want a happy ending kagome and sesshomaru .and having 10 children
This was really painful ro read, I must admit that I had tears rolling down my cheeks the entire time. I love that you have the gift to portrait feelings really nicely, every single chapter has been wonderful, but out of all the previous ones, this is the one that i couldn't help but cry along with. I hope things turn better, I can only hope that a miracle is going to happen, for Sesshomarus' sake!! Thank you for the update, and i hope you update soon (like tomorrow soon LOL) Thanx for sharing such an amazing chapter
Heartbreaking, your chapter showed so much angst and heartbreak over her death.....You can just feel their sorrow and respect for her sacrifice but the despair of her being gone even though what she did saved the world and healed them. I feel so sorry for Sesshomaru though. You can feel his hopelessness and despair at her death.
Amazing story so far.....but waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
Will bribe with reviews...and cookies!
Wow. I have sad feels in my heart. Really cannot wait for the next chapter.
Keep it coming.
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