Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
Great, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
Next, keep it coming.
This chapter is so stupid and dumb, April Fools!
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
Faux66 (Chapter 7) - Sun 23 Mar 2014
I'm a little confused... Did you rewrite some of the story
Mimi (Chapter 7) - Sun 23 Mar 2014
Did you rewrite the chapters a bit ? hmm bit surprising Naraku meet up with Sango but still like the story keep it coming
Yay!!!
Akita (Chapter 11) - Tue 11 Feb 2014
hmm...ya got me. Im interested. More please
Nicole (Chapter 8) - Sat 18 Jan 2014
This is definitely an interesting and interesting piece of Naraku history...
Bounce (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 Jan 2014
I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait to see how it progresses. :)
Ame (Chapter 3) - Thu 02 Jan 2014
Okay....I feel a little less disturbed by how evil Kagome seemed to be in the first chapter. She took control of her life, gained power and ended the hurt the only way she could. You're even making me like Naraku which is hard to do, lol.
Very nicely done, I look forward to seeing how she engs up getting Sesshoumaru and what happens if he ever finds out the truth.
Oh good! I knew Kagome wasn't the bad guy...atleast not completely, but now it makes sense why she did what she did.
ohhh. so kagome is the good guy
heh heh heh heh.
Ame (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Dec 2013
Whoa....not every day you get to see Kagome as the bad guy...even still, I liked it lol. I look forward to see future writing if it comes, keep me posted.
*personality
woah... I was not expecting that... wow. I love the switching of persoality. Very different. Hope there's another chappie! ^_^
Jessica (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Dec 2013
What!
please tell me there is another chap!
I am dying here anyway, I loved it
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