Reviews for The Lucky One by Rhonda

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Libitinaluna (Chapter 27) - Tue 14 Jul 2020

AAAAHHHHH!!! I thought that story was gonna be more devious but im extremely pleased with how it ended!! It was incredible read, thank you!! Ssoo adorable!! Great ending! And im both pleased and surprised on the twist with naraku! Keep  up the great work!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 21) - Fri 06 Dec 2019


Seluna Maru (Chapter 4) - Wed 04 Dec 2019

I remember this! When I was younger I was a little afraid to read this. Now it's like DRAMA!! Sigh Naraku! I don't think I ever made it past a few chapters before. But now I'm gonna read it all


333Tenshi (Chapter 24) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

I know that she really wanted him and all but she was a virgin and it was their first date only days after the funeral wasn't it?


KeikoTakataxx12 (Chapter 27) - Mon 31 Oct 2016

In the beginning when kikyo died I literally bounced for joy. 

 

Seems a bit extreeme but I absolutely loath her. 

 

Great  story!


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 27) - Fri 22 Apr 2016

the was a good story. short, but sweet. i never would have guessed that Naraku would be the good guy in this fanfic. i liked the ending. both couples got their happy endings. it would have been nice to see how inuyasha turned out with his crush. good writing. c'ya'


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Sat 02 Jan 2016

More, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

Great, keep it coming Happy Thanksgiving and Happy New Year


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 24) - Sat 25 Oct 2014

Next, keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 24) - Thu 23 Oct 2014

Keep it coming.


SashaMarie (Chapter 21) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I love this story.  Keep it coming.  I love how you have made Naraku into a somewhat good guy.  Please update soon. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 20) - Fri 04 Jul 2014

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Sat 28 Jun 2014

More, keep it coming.

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 18) - Sat 21 Jun 2014

Wonderful chapter, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Mon 09 Jun 2014

Nice chapter and Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Keep it coming.

 


Ree-san (Chapter 17) - Sun 08 Jun 2014

I really like the rewrite. I'm eagerly awaiting more character development and to see where you take the characters along the way. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 16) - Mon 26 May 2014

Good, keep it coming.

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Sun 11 May 2014

Nice, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 14) - Sun 04 May 2014

Great, keep it coming. 


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