AAAAHHHHH!!! I thought that story was gonna be more devious but im extremely pleased with how it ended!! It was incredible read, thank you!! Ssoo adorable!! Great ending! And im both pleased and surprised on the twist with naraku! Keep  up the great work!

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I remember this! When I was younger I was a little afraid to read this. Now it's like DRAMA!! Sigh Naraku! I don't think I ever made it past a few chapters before. But now I'm gonna read it all

I know that she really wanted him and all but she was a virgin and it was their first date only days after the funeral wasn't it?

In the beginning when kikyo died I literally bounced for joy. 

Seems a bit extreeme but I absolutely loath her. 

Great  story!

the was a good story. short, but sweet. i never would have guessed that Naraku would be the good guy in this fanfic. i liked the ending. both couples got their happy endings. it would have been nice to see how inuyasha turned out with his crush. good writing. c'ya'

More, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

Great, keep it coming Happy Thanksgiving and Happy New Year

Next, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

I love this story.  Keep it coming.  I love how you have made Naraku into a somewhat good guy.  Please update soon. 

Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

More, keep it coming.

 

Wonderful chapter, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Nice chapter and Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Keep it coming.

 

I really like the rewrite. I'm eagerly awaiting more character development and to see where you take the characters along the way. 

Good, keep it coming.

 

Nice, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Great, keep it coming.