loved the update thanks.
Love your story I've enjoyed eading it so far. Well here's what I'm hoping for , so I'm assuming that since Kagome dropped her sketchbook in her haste to get away from Sesshomaru that, 1 shell either go back and demand it back from him,or; 2 Sesshomaru will make up some excuse to go see her and return it back to her.
Since I'm only speculating all I can do is wait and see till the the next chapter to find out, so please update soon.
i can't wait to read more also what dose this mean/ Ibo tot, kto imeyet vse, vlast', den'gi i zemlya pust' tomitsya ot boli, krichat' o poshchade i pust' ne budet prekrashchat' sya yego agoniya, kogda, nakonets, on idet na svoyu poslednyuyu nakazaniye, pust' plamya ada potreblyayut yego nikogda?
Britney (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Sep 2013
amazing
Zoku (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 Sep 2013
So, first, I am enjoying this fic so far. You've done a wonderful job writing it. However, in reading chapter 4 I had a really really "WTH?" moment. in reguards to this line "Kyoto wasn't too far of a drive but it wasn't practically near Tokyo either. "
Were you implying that Kagome drove from Tokyo to Kyoto to vist the park? In reality that is a 5-7hour drive using the expressway, or 2.5 hours in the Shinkansen (or 95 hours walking according to google maps). I don't know if you have continued to refrence various places in Japan through the rest of the story (which I AM looking forward to reading, a lot!!) but I would like to suggest double checking your geography beforehand. Or you can feel free to message and ask me! I've been living in Japan for 8 years, so I am a) much more finicky about misinformation b) also in a great position to help iron out misinformation!
This being said, Please continue to write! I am really looking forward to more.
Very Sincerely,
Zoku
Akita (Chapter 6) - Sat 21 Sep 2013
WHY must you kill me with cliff hangers!?
mari (Chapter 6) - Sat 21 Sep 2013
this story is great love it thanks.
Interesting, keep it coming.
Yay Sesshomaru is trying to be nice for once! I can't wait for the next update~!
Go Kagome, keep it coming.
Sesshomaru!!! I would throttle u but unfortunately i can't reach u. Kagome is such a strong woman so they are really in character. its getting good and eagerly wait for next chap! ^.^
Awwwww, i kept scrolling down hoping for more :( but nope. I'm getting hooked so badly to your story =] and hope for another update soon......Tuesday right?
Grrrrr, Sesshomaru upsets me when he treats Kagome poorly with his attitude on that last chapter >.<
I LOVE THIS STORY! I cannot believe that it only has 4 chapters - I was on the edge of my seat for that last one! I hope you are able to update soon. This story is wonderfully written and very original! Brava!
~Sandreline
Another excellent chapter, keep them coming.
mari (Chapter 4) - Mon 16 Sep 2013
i really like this story thanks for the update.
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