Keep it coming.

The summary of the story was great but when it comes to the real story it really dragged on and on about things that doesnot make any sense at all. You are dragging scences that are not worth dragging and it makes the story drab and boring.i'm sorry but i saw a great potential of your story at first but now if you will just read it from top to end its boring... Hope you will rethink about this story..

Did he switch personalities with Jakotsu or something? Hehehe, I can't wait to see what happens next.

hm....i really like the concept and idea behind your story.....but i cannot but feel that you somehow let yourself get distracted by participating in drabbles....switching between normal chapters and 100 words prompts and i'm sorry to say it, but that really disruptes the flow of the story

......sorry but when someone tells me he has life changing news regarding my only child i simply don't have a mind for a unhurried and comfy dining and especially a shopping trip....including the appearance of a second stranger (Touga) and accepting counseling advice from these two starngers....and what did you intend to do by craeting the bikini set scene!!???

sorry but that really just looks like that you wanted to forcefully squeeze this drabbles into the storyline.... i hope this does not discourage you because i really like this story...but i wanted to be true ...you could kick out these drabble chapters and noone would notice cause they does not help to evolve the story at all

still great thanks.

This story is really awesome and unique! I've not read many stories with an older starting off. Hope you post another chapter soon! I'll be patiently awaiting your updates :)

Keep it coming.

well I'm confused. Summary says Kagome Higurashi gets tracked down by a demon lawyer. He comes bearing the unfortunate news that her son is his lord’s heir. Fortunately, she gets the pleasure of meeting her child's father, and all of the drama that comes along with him as well. I have yet to see any word of that. So far its been Kagome hanging out with people she doesn't know, but seeming like she knows them very well and then going to resturants and shopping. What does that have anything to do with baring unfortunate news about her son being a lord heir? He hasn't even mentioned that. Where does Sesshoumaru come in? There's been no real sign of that or how Kagome even got to know him. So far it seems like she doesn't even know Sesshoumaru. Starting to look like a misleading summary of the story. Bouncing from short chapters to long chapters. 100 word prompts. Just feels like this story is all over the place.

LMAO! I can't believe he actually said that!! I assume the coin landed on head otherwise this wouldn't be as hilarious as it is. XDD

The dynamics between Toga and Gurinman are excellent. This duo amuses me greatly. XD

She was a lot calmer then anyone else would be if they got anything dumped on their clothes.

Anyway, awesome story, can't wait where does this go.

I'm glad you updated this! The dress you decribed sounded real pretty, but that lawyer guy had to ruin it -____-

And Toga sounds like a huge perv lol! I busted out laughing when he said that MILF comment.

Anyways loved the chapter! Update soon! :)

thanks for the update really loved it.

Nice, keep it coming.

LMAO   Oh, God.  NOW I get the title!  lol  Keep it coming!

The men's lines in all of your fics...they're killing me! *is dying of laughter*

Pfft...nope, I-I'm sorry, I would comment more, but learning he was Toga finished me off....*rresumes roaring laughter*

Wow what a chapter. I loved it, I thought it flowed wonderfully. I love your sense of humor and the way you have written the characters. I just love this story and it's honestly been so long since I found a story I enjoyed as much as this one. Can't wait to see what comes next. 

This was funny, keep it coming.

plzzzzzz update soon

Tht was really funny i laughed so hard i cried