Reviews for When It Rains by LM Bluejay

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mari (Chapter 6) - Tue 27 Aug 2013

loved the update thanks.


Luna C. (Chapter 6) - Tue 27 Aug 2013

Lmao! I loved this chapter especially when Kagome pulled Toga's disguise off thinking it was her son. Toga's pickup lines were super cheesy! I like it hahaha! Can't wait for your next update. :)


Leahchan13 (Chapter 5) - Fri 23 Aug 2013

Yay for updates~! Lol that was funny~ I am so excited for the longer updates ahead~!


mari (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Aug 2013

great update thanks.


mari (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Aug 2013

great update thanks.


4evalost (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Aug 2013

lol I think I've fallen in love <3<3


Avid Reader (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Aug 2013

i love sho so much


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Wed 21 Aug 2013

Keep it coming.


Stella Mira (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

Hm, her son sounds like a stud and I really like his attitude. Of course, with his genes, he would be a total hottie. XDD

Glad to read another serial from you. Update soon, ne?

P.S. I have to say that this is an intriguing idea, but I'm confused on the ages of the characters. Kagome has a grown up son and has attested that some decades have passed since his birth. That would make her at best in her late 30's - probably early 40's - since she must have been an adult to take sperm from a sperm bank and her son would still be in his ealry 20's. Unless, you have some explanantion for this planned in the next chapters - like say he marured quickly or she stopped aging after the birth (though, she doesn't seem to know about youkai judging by her reaction to when the lawyer's eyes changed color for a moment, so I find it unlikely. If that's what had happened then she would have researched and eventually found out about youkai.). In that case, ignore my rant. Or, is she actually around the ages I described and you simply haven't mentioned it yet? Hm, cougar Kaggie - not bad, not bad at all! LOL (now I have an idea for an older Kagome..T.T I blame you for this!)


mari (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

really getting good thanks.


Leahchan13 (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

Haha! I loved this chapter and how Sho reacted lol so funny~!


Avid Reader (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

Can't wait for the next chapter 


Caera (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

Ha! A very nice chapter... Love it to pieces


Ealla (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Aug 2013

Oh my god I love it!!!


Fallingyuki (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

This chapter was great.  I love Sho and his attitude.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Enjoy your trip


Neo-Crystal (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

Ooo! I like Sho already! 3:)


rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

next chapter please


Shirley Hashim (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

Dear LM Bluejay

Thank you. It will be most interesting when Sho meets Sesshoumaru!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

Nice, keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

liking it more thanks.


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