put a lemon in the ending

You should put a lemon in the ending, keep it coming.

I will admit I love a good lemon, however in this case I believe it would take away from the personality of the story.   Hint of a consummation has my vote.  I liked how Sesshomaru acts with veiled jealousy of the other males around Kagome.  And the second proposal was endearing to read :)

I look forwards to the next chapter, I do hope Kagome does not have to go through with her threat and her father gives his consent for their wedding.  

Kessa

lemon

I've been enjoying this little exercise, and I must say, one of the reasons I love period writing is the sense of decorum with which they carry themselves.  In short, the LACK of lemons.  I would hate to have to stop reading this story because you put one in.  If you feel you must, for exercise sake, or for the clamouring of your reviewers, I ask that you put it in AFTER a more...appropriate ending.  Thanks!

I'm glad Sesshomaru and Kagome are reunited! Keep it coming.

They reunite!  I think this was my favourite, I love how Kagome doesn't shy away from Sesshomaru's injuries. 

Kessa

~~*sigh* And finally, the reunion! That was always my favorite part of Jane Eyre! ^___^ I look forward to more!

Good. She's back where she is most needed. I'm pleased to hear of it! I wonder how all of this has affected poor Inuyasha. And poor Sessoumaru! I hope he heals! >.<

So Kagome will go to Thornfield then.   Excellent, I look forwards to what will come next.  

Kessa

I'm glad Kagome is going to save Sesshoumaru, keep it coming.

Ohhhh, a vision from our fae princess?   I eagerly await more!

Kessa

Jarren and Mr. Eaton are a trip, So Kagome's dream will be coming true! Keep it coming.

Poor Kagome, keep it coming.

Oh, poor thing!  As an introvert, I must say, their idea of fun sounds absolutely exhausting!  I have to wonder WHY his father has to give permission, though. He is of age of course.  Are we going for "convenient to the plot"? (don't be shy, many authors have gone for that with absolutely no problems)

Well this caught my interest, I wonder who Mr. Eaton represents?   A certain rake, one many apparently do not approve of.  Will he become more deeply involved in Kagome's life?   And what of Sesshomaru?

Kessa

I can see that Kagome is distracted enough from her broken heart, and Jerran seems willing enough to help her.  I am curious as to when Sesshomaru will make an appearance. 

Kessa

Very nice, Kagome's father is very determined to help her heal. 

Im off to the next the update. 

Kessa

I hope Kagome's father don't expect Kagome and Jarren to  become a couple, keep it coming.

This story is really good, I hope you know that. And I can't wait till you update