I'm glad to see Kagome breaking it off with Takeshi, though sadden that she and Sesshoumaru seem to have drifted a bit apart.

Oh so nice seeing Kagome putting Sesshoumaru in his place! Also like seeing that he now's admit to himself his feelings for Kagome. 

Well I know who his helping Inari's uncle, cool twist and yet makes perfect sense. So like how Sesshoumaru put the guard in his place.

I have to wonder if perhaps Inari is being possess by her uncle, thus the his mannerism she's displaying. The centipede lady gives me the creeps and finally still feeling really bad for Kagome.

A very heartbreaking chapter and I feel so sorry for Kagome, Inari and Inyasha.

Poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru, things are heating up between them but Sess is being stubborn. Hope he doesn't take to long to wise up!

I be Myobu is gonna be furious when he finds out he wasn't needed at all.

You got your plot line really well thought out and I like the twist that have appeared so far, especially all the stuff we find out about Myobu i this chapter.

Things are heating up between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, along with the effects of those scratches. Glad to see Inuyasha being OK about how things are going between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.

Oh like how Kagome handled Jun's father and villigers. The ending scene between her and Sesshoumaru was very intimate and makes me wonder if the scratches were poison in some way.

I bet you that the Blue Monk was the second voice talking to Inari's uncle. Would explain the stale smell he had, if he was disguised.

Interesting seeing Kagome find something out about herself that she isn't proud off. Wonder if Inari's uncle was messing with the mirror?

Very interesting chapter this was. The scene between Kagome and Kiyohime was fun to read and like how Kagome got a bit nervous after saying giving her reply to Kiyohime's question.

Also good work in how you wrote Kiyohime's reptilian speech. You didn't go overboard in the least which made reading her words easy.

Happy that Inari isn't to blame and have a good idea who the Master is. Again how you are writing the pack's interactions is really fascinating and fits so well with the storyline.

Oh bloody nice fight scene and again great work on how you wrote Kagome's kitsune instincts. Have to wonder about Inari crying out whe Inuyasha got cut. Her reaction didn't fit with him just getting cut.

There's evil afoot and your story takes a bit of a dark turn. Knew Inari's uncle was no good!  ;)

Oh so love how Sesshoumaru wont admit to being jealous and like how he put Inari’s uncle in his place! Also enjoying how you have developed the closer relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, very nicely done.

Yelp Myobu is a realy slime ball... :p   Again I want to say how you have all the characters developing is very well done and dosen't come across force in the least. Good work!

Yukiko arrival scene was really funny, love Sesshoumaru’s reaction. I also like how you are doing Inari and Inuyasha, again some cute humor!

I don't know wht it is but Myobu sounds like a real creep. Looking forward to seeing what happens at the festival!