This story of your was an amazing and wonderful ride of adventures and you did a fantastic job at writing the scenes and characters with suiuch depth and clarity.
Thank you so much for both writing and sharing it.
Wispr (Chapter 59) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Damn sweet and romantic chapter and the ending was just priceless!
Wispr (Chapter 58) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Ahh I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru, you did his grief and anguish very well. Love the scene with Kagome at the shrine.
Wispr (Chapter 57) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Leave to Kitsune Kagome to find a different route! The teeth scene was "bloody" cool and I like the vision she had of the past.
Wispr (Chapter 56) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Oh what a bloody nasty choice that Kagome has to make, though knowing her, and with her being a Kitsune to boot, she might decide on creating a choice of her own design! ;)
Wispr (Chapter 55) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Oh Goddess talk about an epic battle ending in a epic cliffhanger. Really enjoying this story and so sad to see getting near the end.
Wispr (Chapter 54) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
You know yours tory got some very nifty plot twist and the real nice about them is they make sense!
Wispr (Chapter 53) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Like how you wrote Shippou's reaction and thoughts to what happen in this chapter and I have a feeling Inari's uncle is in for a very bad ending.
Wispr (Chapter 52) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Oh what a bloody nasty twist your story took. So glad I don't have to wait to find out what happen. Have to say again, you really got a gift for words, you know how to make a scene simply come alive.
Wispr (Chapter 51) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
Seriously this chapter got me a bit choked up... fantastic writting.
Wispr (Chapter 50) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
The scene between Yukiko and Sesshoumaru was really cool. I like how you have written his mothers personality. Curious to see what Inari's uncle and grandmother have plan.
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